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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-07-05 23:04:31:
oh, I forgot, you should also delete the word "what" or change it into "that" or "which".

good night, have a good dream. see you.

Ok! I got it.  Good night…
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was hungery to or was eager to stay with her? against the (virgous)wind  instead of with and for?became to rain or became rainy?
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12楼2011-07-06 10:36:04
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Originally posted by aimeng198712 at 2011-07-06 10:36:04:
was hungery to or was eager to stay with her? against the (virgous)wind  instead of with and for?became to rain or became rainy?

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Scarecrow? I just can't help reading your article. Appeared in your dream? Haha, but not me. However I wish I could stay in someone's dream. I will read it for detail and give my advice when I get access to my computer.

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Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2011-07-06 12:15:29:
Scarecrow? I just can't help reading your article. Appeared in your dream? Haha, but not me. However I wish I could stay in someone's dream. I will read it for detail and give my advice when I get  ...

Oh, it's my great honor!  I wish it won't let you down.
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I did wath the vedio, and I do like it . thank you for share.
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17楼2011-07-08 14:50:52
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Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2011-07-06 12:15:29:
Scarecrow? I just can't help reading your article. Appeared in your dream? Haha, but not me. However I wish I could stay in someone's dream. I will read it for detail and give my advice when I get  ...

I'm back and read your article again and also watched the vedio. You're really talented to express his dance in words. Nice job. I like the performance very much, and your writing.
There are few mistakes in it, I suppose you must have a good master of English. The following is my corrections. However, we can discuss.
Always standing on the farmland day and night, regardless of rain and shine（sun）, I am a scarecrow. Had noticed a young lady scarecrow was not far away from me for several days, I was eager to stay with her. So I tried to move close to her all the times(all the time, means always, not times here), but I could do nothing except wiggling(but wiggle, can do nothing but… …) my body with the wind. That was a common night as other thousand ones I had spent here, but things were different, I could move, I could dance, I could even say “Hi” to this familiar world! I couldn’t conceal my excitement and just kept dancing to get close to her. I couldn’t dare(dare not) to see her when I touched her hand, I didn’t know what was called heartbeat until that moment. Nothing could describe how excited I was, and I just couldn’t stop dancing. Had accompanied me for a couple of days, these flowers were still colorful, so I wanted to wear them on my goddess’s head. However, it became(began) to rain, the strong thunder and flashing didn’t mean to stop, and I nearly couldn’t move my body to her for the vigorous wind. Nothing can stop the scarecrow who has faith. The last thing I wanted to do was sending my love to her …
Whether it is a dream, I have shared a moment with her in the end.
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Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2011-07-12 17:59:14:
I'm back and read your article again and also watched the vedio. You're really talented to express his dance in words. Nice job. I like the performance very much, and your writing.
There are fe ...

Oh, you read it so carefully. And thank you for your corrections. Your english is very awesome.
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Originally posted by David0921 at 2011-07-15 09:05:42:
Oh, you read it so carefully. And thank you for your corrections. Your english is very awesome.

Thanks. To tell you what, it takes me some time to pick out these mistakes.
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