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bluesea926

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[求助] 翻译一句话(objectives)

The outcome of interest was the assessment of age at natural menopause and the variables hypothesized as covariates of age at menopause were indicators of demographic and social status, characteristics of the reproductive history and lifestyle behaviour.

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zxs1989

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LZ请看此文中2.2 variables的第一句话——“The outcome of interest was the assessment of age at natural menopause and the variables hypothesized,as covariates of age at menopause were indicators of demographic and social status, and characteristics of the reproductive history and lifestyle behaviour.”
我的翻译是:
由于更年期年龄的协变量能够指示人口和社会状态,以及生育史和生活方式习性特征,本文期望的结果是对自然更年期的年龄及假设的变量进行评定。

但是感觉把as 翻译成因为,逻辑上还是有些别扭。
以前我的刀快,是因为我简单,心里想到什么就去做。--王家卫《东邪西毒》
2楼2011-04-23 14:02:23
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bluesea926

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Originally posted by zxs1989 at 2011-04-23 14:02:23:
LZ请看此文中2.2 variables的第一句话——“The outcome of interest was the assessment of age at natural menopause and the variables hypothesized,as covariates of age at menopause were indicators of  ...

非常感谢您的帮助,可是总觉得这样翻译不是很顺呢,而且还是没弄明白它到底是想研究什么呀,老板要我给他讲讲这篇文章的研究目的是什么,我实在是无法答复啊。
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zxs1989

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文中introduction中的目的:
The aim of the present study is two-fold: (1) to estimate the average age at natural menopause among Polish women using an approach designed to avoid the problems that might account for the inconsistent results of the prior studies and (2) to assess the association of age at menopause with biological, demographic, social and lifestyle factors.
够明白了吧?
以前我的刀快,是因为我简单,心里想到什么就去做。--王家卫《东邪西毒》
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bluesea926(金币+5, 翻译EPI+1): 非常非常的感谢 2011-04-25 21:43:43
The outcome of interest was the assessment of age at natural menopause and the variables hypothesized,as covariates of age at menopause were indicators of demographic and social status, and characteristics of the reproductive history and lifestyle behaviour. 本文期望的结果是对自然更年期的年龄进行评估,同时作为更年期年龄协变量的假设变量是反映人口、社会状态以及生育史和生活习性等特征的指标。
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5楼2011-04-24 01:40:30
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bluesea926

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zxs1989 你好,知道你为了帮我翻译也费了很多宝贵的时间,所以我很想给你金币,可是发现给完楼下后再给你时,系统说我是新虫,没有这个能力,不知道还可以用什么办法补救啊
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bluesea926

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zxs1989 你好,已送给你一朵红花,价值5个金币,以谢应助
7楼2011-04-25 22:34:11
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