24小时热门版块排行榜    

查看: 831  |  回复: 11
本帖产生 1 个 ESEPI ,点击这里进行查看

zhangluyin

铜虫 (正式写手)

[交流] 【Original】Tomorrow evening go on writing.

Today I went to my friend’s home. We cooked the dinner ourselves. Yu boasted her cooking equal to a cook. I scorn it and urged to show off my skill. In my strong request Yu gave me a chance to  cook.
This is what I did.It only a dish of vegetables.Does it look beautiful and delicious ?


Tonight father asked me to see a uncle, who is ill in hospital.I saw uncle two weeks ago. It has been ten years since I saw him last time.I was shocked that he was old and in a poor state of health.He was walking slowly though somebody proped him up.I could almost use move to describle his steps.He smiled to everyone.
When I was young I have the impression that he is tall and powerful.He speak loudly and vigorously, that a great many people admired and feared him.A sharp comparison. I cannot imagine such changes over  time.
It gave me many feeling. Death is the destination we all sharewhich is inevitable.A formidable person will be small and weak one day. As it do in the case of our parents who are always strict with us. when we were young we received instruction from parents and observed it. The role change greatly as we grow up.especially when we are capable of rising family.Parents become dependent on us that their lofty images disappeared. Time goes by it wear everything awary. Our parents are getting older and older, but don't you pay attention to silvery hair is climbing upward quietly. CHANG HUIJIA KANKAN no matter how busy you are. Look after our parents and share time with them before it is too late.

when I wrote in the end I found the opinion is not exactly what I want to express. It is different from initial feeling

[ Last edited by zhangluyin on 2011-4-11 at 00:15 ]
回复此楼

» 猜你喜欢

投向蓝天,你就是白云
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
2楼2011-04-10 00:24:46
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
3楼2011-04-10 00:59:35
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
4楼2011-04-10 07:19:03
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
5楼2011-04-10 10:19:29
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

lppv

荣誉版主 (文坛精英)

无与伦比俱乐部部长

优秀版主优秀版主

won't you change the title?
人活着好没意思啊
6楼2011-04-13 09:35:51
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

zhangluyin

铜虫 (正式写手)

引用回帖:
Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-13 09:35:51:
won't you change the title?

won't you think  the title?
投向蓝天,你就是白云
7楼2011-04-13 09:43:35
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

lppv

荣誉版主 (文坛精英)

无与伦比俱乐部部长

优秀版主优秀版主

引用回帖:
Originally posted by zhangluyin at 2011-04-13 09:43:35:
won't you think  the title?

think that by yourself
人活着好没意思啊
8楼2011-04-13 09:44:30
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

zhangluyin

铜虫 (正式写手)

引用回帖:
Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-13 09:44:30:
think that by yourself

I won't think it . It takes my previous time


I prefer the BBs instead of EPI. can you do that?
投向蓝天,你就是白云
9楼2011-04-13 09:46:12
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

lppv

荣誉版主 (文坛精英)

引用回帖:
Originally posted by zhangluyin at 2011-04-13 09:46:12:
I won't think it . It takes my previous time


I prefer the BBs instead of EPI. can you do that?

10楼2011-04-13 09:49:43
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
相关版块跳转 我要订阅楼主 zhangluyin 的主题更新
普通表情 高级回复 (可上传附件)
最具人气热帖推荐 [查看全部] 作者 回/看 最后发表
[教师之家] 焦虑 +8 水冰月月野兔 2026-03-13 12/600 2026-03-18 15:27 by 咪呜喵呜
[考研] 302求调剂 +10 呼呼呼。。。。 2026-03-17 10/500 2026-03-18 12:45 by Linda Hu
[考研] 280求调剂 +6 咕噜晓晓 2026-03-18 7/350 2026-03-18 11:25 by 无际的草原
[考研] 0703化学求调剂 总分331 +3 ZY-05 2026-03-13 3/150 2026-03-18 10:58 by macy2011
[考研] 278求调剂 +5 烟火先于春 2026-03-17 5/250 2026-03-18 08:43 by 星空星月
[考研] 326求调剂 +5 上岸的小葡 2026-03-15 6/300 2026-03-17 17:26 by ruiyingmiao
[考研] 本人考085602 化学工程 专硕 +16 不知道叫什么! 2026-03-15 18/900 2026-03-17 17:05 by ruiyingmiao
[考研] 290求调剂 +3 p asserby. 2026-03-15 4/200 2026-03-17 16:35 by wangkm
[考研] 275求调剂 +4 太阳花天天开心 2026-03-16 4/200 2026-03-17 10:53 by 功夫疯狂
[考研] 考研调剂 +3 淇ya_~ 2026-03-17 5/250 2026-03-17 09:25 by Winj1e
[基金申请] 今年的国基金是打分制吗? 50+3 zhanghaozhu 2026-03-14 3/150 2026-03-16 17:07 by 北京莱茵润色
[考研] 0703化学调剂,求各位老师收留 +8 秋有木北 2026-03-14 8/400 2026-03-16 15:21 by 哦哦123
[考研] 297一志愿上交085600求调剂 +5 指尖八千里 2026-03-14 5/250 2026-03-14 17:26 by a不易
[考研] 招收0805(材料)调剂 +3 18595523086 2026-03-13 3/150 2026-03-14 00:33 by 123%、
[考研] 材料与化工(0856)304求B区调剂 +6 邱gl 2026-03-12 7/350 2026-03-13 23:24 by 邱gl
[考研] 311求调剂 +3 冬十三 2026-03-13 3/150 2026-03-13 20:41 by JourneyLucky
[考研] 310求调剂 +3 【上上签】 2026-03-11 3/150 2026-03-13 16:16 by JourneyLucky
[考研] 070303一志愿西北大学学硕310找调剂 +3 d如愿上岸 2026-03-13 3/150 2026-03-13 10:43 by houyaoxu
[考研] 321求调剂(食品/专硕) +3 xc321 2026-03-12 6/300 2026-03-13 08:45 by xc321
[考研] 081200-11408-276学硕求调剂 +3 崔wj 2026-03-12 4/200 2026-03-12 19:33 by 求调剂zz
信息提示
请填处理意见