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[交流] 【Original】Tomorrow evening go on writing.

Today I went to my friend’s home. We cooked the dinner ourselves. Yu boasted her cooking equal to a cook. I scorn it and urged to show off my skill. In my strong request Yu gave me a chance to  cook.
This is what I did.It only a dish of vegetables.Does it look beautiful and delicious ?


Tonight father asked me to see a uncle, who is ill in hospital.I saw uncle two weeks ago. It has been ten years since I saw him last time.I was shocked that he was old and in a poor state of health.He was walking slowly though somebody proped him up.I could almost use move to describle his steps.He smiled to everyone.
When I was young I have the impression that he is tall and powerful.He speak loudly and vigorously, that a great many people admired and feared him.A sharp comparison. I cannot imagine such changes over  time.
It gave me many feeling. Death is the destination we all sharewhich is inevitable.A formidable person will be small and weak one day. As it do in the case of our parents who are always strict with us. when we were young we received instruction from parents and observed it. The role change greatly as we grow up.especially when we are capable of rising family.Parents become dependent on us that their lofty images disappeared. Time goes by it wear everything awary. Our parents are getting older and older, but don't you pay attention to silvery hair is climbing upward quietly. CHANG HUIJIA KANKAN no matter how busy you are. Look after our parents and share time with them before it is too late.

when I wrote in the end I found the opinion is not exactly what I want to express. It is different from initial feeling

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won't you change the title?
人活着好没意思啊
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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-13 09:35:51:
won't you change the title?

won't you think  the title?
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Originally posted by zhangluyin at 2011-04-13 09:43:35:
won't you think  the title?

think that by yourself
人活着好没意思啊
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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-13 09:44:30:
think that by yourself

I won't think it . It takes my previous time


I prefer the BBs instead of EPI. can you do that?
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