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You are welcome to resubmit your paper after a very careful revision as a new submission, making sure that every aspect of the manuscript is in accordance with the author guidelines. This should include, but not be limited to, the comments mentioned below. Comments: 1) There are many instances of badly constructed sentences. E.g. "It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece was the suitable sequnece of laccase and xylanase synergitic biobleaching It was shown by SEM that xylanase pretreatment increased the accessibility of laccased to residual lignin and facilitated to remove lignin. ", "For a specific target brightness level of over 80% ISO, XL pretreatment can save as 40% H2O2 cost while the visicosity increased 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence", " It was also found that synergetic biobleaching not only decreases the bleaching chemicals but also has a good selectivity and bleachability.", "Bleaching sequneces involving laccase(L) and xylanase(X) were used to bleach oxygen-delignified wheat straw pullp. ", "TCF sequences include oxygen, hydrogen peroxide and ozone are based stages " and "The use of xylanases (X) can enhances the bleaching effect of chemical reagents and decrease chemical consumption. ". Revise the whole manuscript for clarity. Please do not revise only the samples listed in the comments, which are highlighted as serious problems. 2) Please do not embed tables or figures within the text of your manuscript file. Collected figure captions should be provided on a separate page and the order of the figures and tables at the end of the manuscript should be: figure captions page, tables, and figures. Please revise 3) Type the whole manuscript including tables, references and figure captions with double line spacing. 4) Please note that the reference list must conform strictly to the Guide for Authors. Journal names should be abbreviated. 5) Use superscript lowercase letters as footnote indicators in tables. 请帮忙看看那几个句子，有什么毛病，谢谢 |
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wxwxyh(金币+2): 2011-03-01 21:28:43
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It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece was the suitable sequnece of laccase and xylanase synergitic biobleaching 我觉得这句话可以改成It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece was suitable for laccase and xylanase synergitic biobleaching It was shown by SEM that xylanase pretreatment increased the accessibility of laccased to residual lignin and facilitated to remove lignin. 改成：It was shown from SEM observation that xylanase pretreatment increased the accessibility of laccased to residual lignin and facilitated removal of lignin. |
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For a specific target brightness level of over 80% ISO, XL pretreatment can save as 40% H2O2 cost while the visicosity increased 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence 改成For a specific target brightness level of over 80% ISO, XL pretreatment can save 40% H2O2 and increase the viscosity to 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence It was also found that synergetic biobleaching not only decreases the bleaching chemicals but also has a good selectivity and bleachability 改成It was also found that synergetic biobleaching not only decreases the bleaching chemicals but also has the advantages of good selectivity and bleachability |
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