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You are welcome to resubmit your paper after a very careful revision as a new submission, making sure that every aspect of the manuscript is in accordance with the author guidelines. This should include, but not be limited to, the comments mentioned below.


Comments:

1) There are many instances of badly constructed sentences. E.g. "It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece  was  the  suitable  sequnece  of  laccase  and  xylanase  synergitic biobleaching  It  was  shown  by  SEM  that  xylanase  pretreatment  increased  the accessibility  of  laccased  to  residual  lignin  and  facilitated  to  remove  lignin. ", "For a  specific  target brightness  level of over 80%  ISO, XL pretreatment can  save as 40% H2O2 cost while  the visicosity  increased 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence", " It was  also  found  that  synergetic  biobleaching  not  only  decreases  the bleaching chemicals but also has a good selectivity and bleachability.", "Bleaching sequneces involving laccase(L) and xylanase(X)    were used to bleach oxygen-delignified  wheat  straw  pullp. ", "TCF  sequences  include  oxygen,  hydrogen  peroxide  and  ozone  are  based  stages " and "The use of xylanases (X) can enhances  the bleaching effect of chemical reagents and
decrease chemical consumption. ". Revise the whole manuscript for clarity. Please do not revise only the samples listed in the comments, which are highlighted as serious problems.

2) Please do not embed tables or figures within the text of your manuscript file. Collected figure captions should be provided on a separate page and the order of the figures and tables at the end of the manuscript should be: figure captions page, tables, and figures. Please revise

3)  Type the whole manuscript including tables, references and figure captions with double line spacing.

4) Please note that the reference list must conform strictly to the Guide for Authors. Journal names should be abbreviated.

5) Use superscript lowercase letters as footnote indicators in tables.
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wxwxyh(金币+2): 2011-03-01 21:28:43
wxwxyh(金币+6): 2011-03-23 10:04:12
It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece  was  the  suitable  sequnece  of  laccase  and  xylanase  synergitic biobleaching
我觉得这句话可以改成It was found that XLE bleaching sequnece  was suitable  for laccase  and  xylanase  synergitic biobleaching

It  was  shown  by  SEM  that  xylanase  pretreatment  increased  the accessibility  of  laccased  to  residual  lignin  and  facilitated  to  remove  lignin.
改成：It was shown from SEM observation that  xylanase  pretreatment   increased the accessibility of laccased  to  residual lignin and facilitated removal of lignin.
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Originally posted by wxwxyh at 2011-03-01 11:54:03:
You are welcome to resubmit your paper after a very careful revision as a new submission, making sure that every aspect of the manuscript is in accordance with the author guidelines. This should in ...

自己顶下，大家一般找什么人修呢？
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wxwxyh(金币+2): 2011-03-01 21:28:22
wxwxyh(金币+1): 2011-03-23 10:04:18
For a  specific  target brightness  level of over 80%  ISO, XL pretreatment can  save as 40% H2O2 cost while  the visicosity  increased 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence
改成For a  specific  target brightness  level of over 80% ISO,   XL pretreatment can  save 40% H2O2  and increase the viscosity to 6.7% compared with QP bleaching sequence

It was  also  found  that  synergetic  biobleaching  not  only  decreases  the bleaching chemicals but also has a good selectivity and bleachability
改成It was  also  found  that  synergetic  biobleaching  not  only  decreases  the bleaching chemicals but also has the advantages of  good selectivity and bleachability
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wxwxyh(金币+4): 2011-03-01 21:28:11
wxwxyh(金币+5): 2011-03-23 10:04:30
你的英语水平确实不咋地。单说这句“The use of xylanases (X) can enhances  the bleaching effect of chemical reagents and decrease chemical consumption”， can后应接enhance原型，而不是enhances。抛开can后面接什么动词不谈，共用一个主语的and前后连接的动词形式（在这里指的是单复数）也不一致！这句话至少应该是：
The use of xylanases (X) can enhance  the bleaching effect of chemical reagents and decrease chemical consumption。
我不懂你的专业，我觉得应该还要有sth effects on sth，所以上句进一步表达为：The use of xylanases (X) can enhance  the bleaching effect of chemical reagents on ··· and decrease chemical consumption。
粗浅之见，仅供参考！

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