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suppper

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[交流] 排比句谁帮我润色一下哇???

审稿人说我写的太烂了,我实在是不会改了,这排比句我看了就不想看第二遍了,希望英语大侠们帮我润色一下哇!!感激涕零!!

In this study, the compatibility between blood and dextran-stabilized Fe3O4 MF was investigated. The effects of temperature, shear rate and applied magnetic field on the viscosity of blood and MF/blood mixtures were investigated. The influences of the concentration of MF and the intensity of magnetic field on the heating ability were studied. The results revealed that the viscosity and coagulation time of blood are almost unaffected by small addition of dextran-stabilized Fe3O4 MF, showing good compatibility with blood.
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Risingstar

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我看写得挺好的,审稿的意思是缺乏一些必要的逻辑和衔接吧,这个LZ自己才能把握好啦
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ringzhu(金币+4): 辛苦~~ 2011-03-06 15:35:53
In this paper, the compatibility between blood and dextran-stabilized Fe3O4 MF was investigated。The  effects of temperature, shear rate,applied magnetic field on the viscosity of blood ,MF/blood mixtures ,the influences of the concentration of MF and the intensity of magnetic field on the heating ability were studied. The results showed that the viscosity and coagulation time of blood are almost unaffected by small addition of dextran-stabilized Fe3O4 MF, showing good compatibility with blood.
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ringzhu(金币+4): 辛苦~~ 2011-03-06 15:36:02
In this study, the compatibility between blood and dextran-stabilized Fe3O4 MF was investigated. The effects of temperature, shear rate and applied magnetic field on the viscosity of blood and MF/blood mixtures, as well the influences of the concentration of MF and the intensity of magnetic field on the heating ability were studied. The results revealed that the viscosity and coagulation time of blood are almost unaffected by small addition of dextran-stabilized Fe3O4 MF, showing good compatibility with blood.
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