[交流] 求助一句英文，谢谢

Originally posted by Risingstar at 2011-01-16 17:02:13:
LZ中文表述也欠严谨吧，下面是我对你陈述的理解，翻译成英语；

For all users the proposed cross-layer algorithm yields the maximum rate of all the algorithms.  清晰简洁

Ps：1)不推荐用employ
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Originally posted by sltmac at 2011-01-16 16:30:57:
可以用，obtain前加to，或者这句话用被动语态表述更好

Originally posted by cqpeier at 2011-01-16 17:22:42:


largest rate than other algorithms.不可以吗？必须all users 作主语，比较的结果是all users 获得了最大速率。

Originally posted by Risingstar at 2011-01-16 17:32:21:



1）largest rate than other algorithms 是不可以的；
可以改为largest rate among all algorithms
2）如果要用all users做主语，可以说
all users adopting the proposed  algorithm get the m ...

Originally posted by Risingstar at 2011-01-16 17:36:43:



这样吧
Users who adopt the proposed algorithm get the maximum rates of all, some of whom adopt other algorithms

Users who adopt the proposed algorithm get bigger rates than those of other ...

Originally posted by cqpeier at 2011-01-16 20:01:58:



中文是这个意思：当我们的算法被使用时，与其他算法相比，所有的用户都获得了最大的速率

这些用户并不是 算法的使用者