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[交流] 论文大修,请高手指教

论文被一个审稿人提了二十多条一件,有些地方不是很清楚
A MAJOR general point:

* the paper starts with an interesting introduction on the final goal of the manufactured double layer => applied research
** the paper concerns a very scientific and detailed experimental characterization (XPS, XRD, Raman, AFM,...) with no further hint at the future application and no test to check the applicability of the double layer (for example, check the resistance of SiC in contact

No test of adhesion (scratch test, for example) or of chemical resistance against Pb-Li alloys have been reported, so what should the reader are going to do after these preliminary results ?

A second MAJOR general point:
=> which are the "innovative" results ? For example:
1)
2)
3) ....
再往下是意见。现在不太理解 MAJOR general point是什么意思?,再就是innovative results应该写到哪里?introduction里面还是results里面呢?高手指教!
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songbin664(金币+5): 2010-12-20 08:24:13
songbin664(金币+2): 2010-12-22 08:14:45
再往下是意见。现在不太理解 MAJOR general point是需要大修的地方吧
再就是innovative results在Introduction可以提一下,就说这个数据或者结果是首次获得的,然后在文章中也要有所体现,results是一般性的描述实验结果以及一些prospects
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