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biozhangliang

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[交流] BITE审稿结果回来了,给大家分享下,看接收希望大不?顺便求祝福!已有12人参与

BITE的效率还是不错的,除了审稿用了两个月。该编辑做的事情都很快!非常感谢这样的编辑,审稿人的意见有点别扭。前面说我文笔不错,后面又让我改文字,不知所云。有些意见也很不好回复。纠结,不过有得改就好。下面附上审稿意见,给大家分享下。
Reviewer #1: The manuscript describes the development of bioprocess for bioethanol production from raw sweet potato at laboratory, pilot and industrial scale. Sweet potato could become an attractive feedstock for bioethanol production provided it is produced in surplus quantities. Though China is the world's largest sweet potato producer, the cost could become the limiting factor for its use as feedstock. Instead of corn or any other starchy material, the authors have used sweet potato as the substrate after hydrolysing it with commercial amylase. The efficiencies of conversion are significantly higher even at pilot as well as industrail scale. However, the manuscript needs lot of revision before it is accepted for publication. I suggest following revisions.
1. Introduction to be shortened to one and half page.
2. All values such as ethanol concentration, productivity should be calculated as g/L and not g/kg since it is not clear that g/kg of what? Whether it is g/kg of sweet potato mash. If it is so then the calculated values are not correct. For example, in section 3.3, the author has used 24% of total carbohydrate which gives 112.4g of ethanol. This means that the ethanol yield is 93%. This also means that the experiment is started with 705 gm of total sweet potato mash and this gave 112.4 g of ethanol. This means that the maximum ethanol concentration obtained is 159g/kg of sweet potato mash. Hence I think it should be g/L and not g/kg.
3. The analysis of total carbohydrate in terms of different cellulose, hemicellulose, starch , sucrose should be given. This will help to calculate the yields and efficiencies of ethanol production.
4. Glucoamylase and amyloglucosidase activities should be mentioned. It is not clear whether 500 AGU or KNU.
5. No mention of how mant units of amylase per g of carbohydrate are used for saccharification.
6. Fig 2 is not clear with respect to symbols. Total RS for SSF, SHF and PSSF should be same which appear as different from the Figure 2.
7. In Fig 3, it is not clear how much was individual sugars such as glucose, xylose, galactose, arabinose and fructose are pre4sent during start of fermentation. It is also not clear what are A, B, C.
8. Table 3 should be removed since I see no significant difference yields, productivity, and concentration of ethanol using with and without xylanase. Xylanase appears to have no role in fermentation. If it contains xylan then it should show xylose which is not fermented by S. cerevisiae.
9. English must be revised.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript was well written and according to BT's profile. The methodologies, results and discussion are clear. The manuscript shows no major news in relation to what is already published about bioethanol production from starch products (corn, cassava, sweet potato). The yields achieved in the fermentation (laboratory, pilot and industrial) are satisfactory. For this article brings some interesting information I suggest that the authors include in results and discussion a new table comparing production costs for bioethanol production from sweet potato and compare with other raw materials (corn, sugar beet, cassava, sugar cane and lignocellulosics). A review of English must also be made.



Other comments
- Remove first sentence from abstract
- Remove Fig 3 by giving details in text only.
- Include following refs in introduction/discussion: Bioresource Technology 101 (24), pp. 9710-9714; Therrmodynamic analysis of lignocellulosic biofuel production via a biochemical process: Guiding technology selection and research focus, Sohel, M.I., Jack, M.W.Bioresource Technology, Article in Press, Biomass and Bioenergy 34 (9), pp. 1336-1341;

这个Other comments是不是可以理解为编辑的意见?要是编辑让加该期刊的文章,是不是就意味着编辑比较倾向接收该杂志,这个有点不解

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the manuscript needs lot of revision before it is accepted for publication.

The manuscript was well written and according to BT's profile.

恭喜楼主,肯定接受了撒。认真修改,中了记得发 BB
3楼2010-12-14 09:32:37
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希望是有的,看你改得怎么样了!
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应该问题不大
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先恭喜楼主了,从审稿意见上看 应该还算乐观。
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Originally posted by biozhangliang at 2010-12-14 09:09:47:
BITE的效率还是不错的,除了审稿用了两个月。该编辑做的事情都很快!非常感谢这样的编辑,审稿人的意见有点别扭。前面说我文笔不错,后面又让我改文字,不知所云。有些意见也很不好回复。纠结,不过有得改就好。下 ...

审稿意见内容多不是坏事,一般说来,BITE的文章只要修回,无论大修小修,仔细回复和认真修改必中,other comments是编辑的意见,说明编辑认可楼主的文章。
咱也是有组织的人了...
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wzl1971

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恭喜,应该没问题!
8楼2010-12-14 11:02:23
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糖果仔

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小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包,谢谢回帖交流
我今年中过一篇BITE,个人觉得还是希望很大的,这个杂志不难中,按修改意见一条条改就可以了。
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biozhangliang

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起来,太不给力了,才几个人回复!看来不送金币就不行
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10楼2010-12-15 09:33:08
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