| 查看: 1927 | 回复: 12 | |||
| 当前只显示满足指定条件的回帖，点击这里查看本话题的所有回帖 | |||
[交流]
【咨询】第三篇toefl作文，欢迎大家点评。
|
|||
|
作文题目：Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Several days ago, when my classmates and I were preparing the test of IBT, I found the truth that different ones did make different choices between studying alone and studying together. Those students who tend to study by themselves suppose independence and the circumstance free of interruption is the key point to improve the efficiency of study. Remarkable though the advantages are, I believe, they can not compete with the benefits which are obtained from reciprocal help and encouragement in a study group, when we consider the difficulty of subjects we study. First of all, never do I reckon knowledge is easy to gain, and the advantage of teamwork to surmount handicaps is apparent. Therefore I prefer to dealing with issues of study with others. When I was a freshman, mathematic was a deadly weak point of me and then I took part in a mathematic group in my university. Discussions of elusive subjects as well as the merits of each other were helpful for me to comprehend those mathematic principles and refine my learning method. Eventually, not only did I pass the final exam, but also got an award in a mathematic compete. It would be incredible if I did without mutual help. Moreover, the mental incentives from the other ones is a crucial aspect for a person to be succeed, and naturally the success in study is not a exception. For instance, when someones encounter some setbacks in study such as failure in routine tests and lack of time to carry on, and hesitate over the choice between holding on or giving up their subject, their classmates with them will probably encourage them to recover self-confidence and give them some constructive advice. Admittedly, striving for knowledge alone means less bother from surrounding and more opportunity to form independent attitude. There are also a lot of examples of great persons that they achieve goals of lives just by self-study such as Abraham Lincoln. However, people like Lincoln are the minority of society, and it is obviously difficult to copy his achievement by common people just like us. And what is more, I deem Lincoln would initiate his political career without many setbacks resulted from lack of education, if he had more chances to study with others. As far as I know, a increasing number of students are aware of that the advantages of group study overweight those of study alone and choose to join some interest groups for mutual aid in study. Coincident with the opinion of many people is my heartfelt agreement with the idea that students should study together with classmates. [ Last edited by keyares on 2010-11-20 at 16:30 ] |
回复此楼» 猜你喜欢
不自信的我
已经有11人回复
-
北核录用
已经有3人回复
-
要不要辞职读博？
已经有6人回复
-
实验室接单子
已经有3人回复
-
磺酰氟产物，毕不了业了！
已经有8人回复
-
求助:我三月中下旬出站，青基依托单位怎么办？
已经有10人回复
-
26申博（荧光探针方向，有机合成）
已经有4人回复
-
论文终于录用啦！满足毕业条件了
已经有26人回复
-
2026年机械制造与材料应用国际会议 （ICMMMA 2026）
已经有4人回复
-
Cas 72-43-5需要30g，定制合成，能接单的留言
已经有8人回复
» 本主题相关价值贴推荐，对您同样有帮助:
- 托福生死大战在即，作文急需提高，独立一篇，真心恳请各路高手给予点评。
已经有10人回复
- 老托福 450篇6分作文，可以拿着参考。（已搜索，无重复）
已经有67人回复
- 美国留学求定位，GRE1510/3.5,ToEFL110,GPA3.44,英文论文一篇二作，普通211本科
已经有13人回复
- 【咨询】第二篇托福作文，重金求改。
已经有4人回复
» 抢金币啦！回帖就可以得到:
-
散金
+5/765
-
坐标济南，来碰碰运气
+1/450
-
中国科学院大学功能多孔组装材料实验室招聘启事
+2/336
-
博士去军队文职怎么样
+5/220
-
16年了，来看看大家
+1/198
-
南京工业大学城市建设学院招收建筑节能方向2026年入学全日制博士
+2/98
-
中国石油大学（华东）电气工程专业博士研究生招生
+1/79
-
成都理工大学全国重点实验室公开诚聘绿色有机合成方向联培生及科研助理
+1/76
-
留学导师避雷——望传播
+1/75
-
坐标济南，山东农科院招 有机合成 or 药物化学 联培硕士研究生
+1/37
-
中科院理化技术研究所张飞龙研究员/王树涛研究员团队招生（博士/硕士）
+1/32
-
中国科学院大连化学物理研究所DNL0902研究组招聘博士后和职工
+1/31
-
SCI，计算机相关可以写
+1/23
-
SCI，计算机相关可以写
+1/22
-
SCI，计算机相关可以写
+1/21
-
SCI，计算机相关可以写
+1/20
-
SCI，计算机相关可以写
+1/18
-
杨老师招收联合培养硕士、博士生或客座学生
+1/16
-
2026年黄河科技学院纳米功能材料研究所招聘
+2/8
-
中科院深圳理工大学网络课题组招聘博后/RA/实习生
+1/7
13楼2010-11-29 11:03:13
2楼2010-11-19 20:32:33
3楼2010-11-19 21:59:57
4楼2010-11-19 22:03:18