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hellowinall

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[交流] 请问is without out 是积极还是消极的意思

审稿人意见中有句话:Merging of existing part solutions of all necessary dimensions and alignment of system activities between all dimension is without out a significant and innovative solution ... but this story does not emerge clearly from the write-up.

前部分是对文章思想的评价和建议。不知道审稿人是说文章的思想重要且创新性强,还是相反的意思,说文章不重要,没有创新性?

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hellowinall

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感觉这里的Out是非规范用法,相等于out of (not having) 如He ran out the door.

所以 is without out = is without not having
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xkool

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hellowinall(金币+1):thanks 2010-09-21 08:28:07
同没看懂,为啥我就感觉是读不通的病句呢?
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Originally posted by hellowinall at 2010-09-14 18:23:35:
审稿人意见中有句话:Merging of existing part solutions of all necessary dimensions and alignment of system activities between all dimension is without out a significant and innovative solution ...  ...

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jlc夜雨

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hellowinall(金币+1):thanks 2010-09-21 08:28:12
应该是多写了一个out
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hellowinall

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Originally posted by jlc夜雨 at 2010-09-14 18:53:02:
应该是多写了一个out

那岂不是说文章没有创新?
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