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Step 1: Alarm receipt
After an accident has occurred, workers in the monitoring centre find the accident in the plant covered by monitoring system. At the same time, the accident victims or witnesses can raise the alarm on the emergency telephone in the accident region or by cell phone.
Step 2: Emergency evaluation
After receiving an accident alarm, the emergency command center immediately records the accident information, including time, place, accident type, accident description and so on, makes a preliminary analysis and confirmation, and the emergency rescue pre-project will be generated automatically. Simultaneously, the accident information will be issued through the monitoring system and supporting system.
Step 3: Launched corresponding emergency plans
After confirming the accident type and the accident region, the accident commander will launched the corresponding emergency plan through the emergency command center.
Step 4: Emergency rescue actions
And then the all emergency rescue orders will be issued through the emergency command center and the emergency rescue project will be carried out. According to the different rescue requirements and functions of teams, the accident and rescue requirement information will be distributed to all the relevant teams which are involved in the rescue. Sometimes, because of the instability of the domino accident, although the emergency rescue team shall actively adopt salvaging measures so as to prevent elevation of its seriousness in the early stage of emergencies, the impact of the domino accident is still unfolding. So, when the accident uncontrolled, it is necessary to increase the rescue forces.
Step 5: Emergency recovery
After victims are rescued and the accident is controlled, the accident commander can declare a state of emergency recovery. Its major tasks are: first, to unset the dangerous condition; second, to clear the accident site; third, to investigate the accident; Finally, the incident commander, by various approaches, needs to placate the neighboring citizens and reassure the victims.
Step 6: Evaluate result and feedback
After the rescue action is finished, the emergency command center issues an order that the emergency response has ended. The commander needs to thank all of the members who executed the ERS, and then requests the spokesperson to hold a press conference to explain the whole process of handling the accident. At the same time, the emergency command center will record a detailed accident rescue treatment and evaluate the treatment result. On this basis, the emergency command center will update the emergency resource database and to send feedbacks to emergency command center to improve.

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