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oytxtu

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因此,基于方程1,我们可以首先获得在第一种情况下左终端和右终端的温度以及他们之间温差的关系。

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Thus, basing on the Eq. 1 one can firstly obtain the relationship among the temperature of left and right terminals and their temperature bias under the first case.

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from the grammar point of view, the two "and"s are different, don't worry about that, the structure is good.
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zerohead

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oytxtu(金币+5, 翻译EPI+1):thx you 2010-08-07 20:53:32
因此,基于方程1,我们可以首先获得在第一种情况下左终端和右终端的温度以及他们之间温差的关系。

Thus, by considering Eq. 1, the relationship among the temperatures of left and right terminals and their (temperature) bias under the first case/condition can be obtained.

Or
Based on Eq. 1, the …
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oytxtu

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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-08-07 18:16:39:
因此,基于方程1,我们可以首先获得在第一种情况下左终端和右终端的温度以及他们之间温差的关系。

Thus, by considering Eq. 1, the relationship among the temperatures of left and right terminals and th ...

among后面的两个and可以 想办法去掉一个不咯?
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zehuac(金币+1):多谢参与哦 2010-08-07 23:12:19
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Thus, by considering Eq. 1, the relationship among the temperatures of the both terminals and their (temperature) bias under the first case/condition can be obtained.
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