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[交流] 【求助/交流】一封老外教授给我的回信~(8.4更新)!已有50人参与

今天上网检索文献,需要一篇关于pseudomonas 的文章,我给通讯作者发了一份电子邮件,
原文:
Dear professor Michael Givskov,
    I'm a  postgraduate from Molecular Microbiology Laboratory, Ministry of Education Key Laboratory, Faculty of Life Sciences, Northwest University,in China.our lab also do some research on Pseudomonas aeruginosa . becase of my research, I need this paper :Interference of Pseudomonas aeruginosa signalling and biofilm formation for infection control,can you send me this paper,thank you !

   best wishes!

回信内容:
On vacation till August 9th

大家说说这回信什么意思?是说这个教授休假到8月9号么?难道等8月9号以后他才会给我发这篇文章?

ps:其实这篇文献在小木虫和别的论坛都可以求到,但是我想尝试一下管通讯作者看要的到不?结果就是这样的的回信?
   另外还请高手指点一下我信件内容的不足之处,以让我提高!谢谢!

很感谢大家的建议,也有高手指出了我这信中的问题,确实写的过于没有水平,不过我还是学会了很多,至于有朋友认为我这是在恶搞,没有这个意思~真的~以后还希望和大家一块交流,这样我才会不断进步!真的感谢大家!

这是改后的,大家给看看,指点一下:
Dear professor Michael Givskov,
    I'm a  postgraduate in the Faculty of Life Sciences of Northwest University in China.Our research is focused on the biofilm of  Pseudomonas aeruginosa. We would like to furthur investigate the potential role of the biofilm,and We are very interested in one of your papers titled:  Interference of Pseudomonas aeruginosa signalling and biofilm formation for infection control, We are very appreciated if you could kindly send us this paper, thank you very much!

   Best wishes!


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Originally posted by 冼亮淀粉酶 at 2010-08-04 00:46:47:
Dear professor Michael Givskov,
    I'm a  postgraduate(学生) from Molecular Microbiology Laboratory, Ministry of Education Key Laboratory, Faculty of Life Sciences, Northwest University,in(默认 ...

谢谢您的建议,我以后会注意写法的~
哎,都有点自卑了~
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Originally posted by 看天 at 2010-08-04 14:32:52:
不是的
我一般不说自己是学生 我说自己是个teacher呵呵
we need your paper感觉太生硬 一般都说我们对你的一片名为....的文章 很感兴趣 但是得不到 我们将会非常感激...如果你能 给我们一份PDF copy...之类的
...

学习了~谢谢了!
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