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论文题目：远洋船舶最佳避台航线设计软件系统研究
The study on ocean vessle's optimum route designing software system for typhoon evasion
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Dozens of typhoons generate every year in the world. Due to the devastating winds, heavy rainfall, billow and storm tide, typhoon is a major threat to ocean ships. The improper measures to evade typhoon often cause damage to ships and cargo, and even sink ships and kill people. The present research and application on typhoon evasion is deficient in china. In order to meet the shipping companies’ requirements on typhoon evasion, this paper relies on scientific and technological support of national projects "Ship and cargo online monitoring system (SCOM)" and researches on the Ocean Vessel's Optimum Route Designing Software System for Typhoon Evasion.
On the basis of analyzing the present research status at home and abroad, this paper proposes the significance and purpose of the research. Combined with shipping companies’ requirements and principles on typhoon evasion, this paper uses track calculating method, target circle and radar plotting method. This paper researches on whether the ship needs to take action, the time and the measures to evade typhoon. In order to reduce the economic looses, this ship should return to the planned route or resume the planned speed at the proper time, so this paper studies on the route to return to the planed route and the time to resume the planed speed. After getting new typhoon information, the system should design new route to evade typhoon according to the new information. The Ocean Vessel's Optimum Route Designing Software System for Typhoon Evasion is implemented on the SCOM. By doing simulation experiments, this paper proves the correctness of the scheme and summarizes the sources of error.
The experiment shows that the system can reduce typhoon’s impact on ship to some extent and ensure the economy and security of ship, so it meets the shipping companies’ requirements on typhoon evasion.

中文摘要：全世界每年都会有数十个台风生成，台风所带来的大风、强降水、巨浪和风暴潮等会对船舶航行安全形成重大威胁，因规避台风的措施采取不当而引起船损、货损甚至船毁人亡的事故时有发生。目前国内在避台航线设计方面的研究与应用仍存在一定的不足，为了满足船公司在避台航线设计方面的需求，本文依托于国家科技支撑计划项目“远洋船舶及货物运输在线监控系统”，对远洋船舶最佳避台航线设计系统进行了研究。
在综合分析国内外在避台航线设计方面的研究现状的基础上，本文提出实现远洋最佳避台航线设计系统的重要意义和研究目标。结合船公司在避台航线设计方面的实际需求以及航海中避台原则，本文利用航迹计算法、目标圆法和雷达标绘原理，对船舶是否需要避台、避台行动开始时间和避台措施进行了计算。为了减少因避台所产生的经济损失，船舶应选择合适的时机回到计划航线上或恢复计划航速，因此本文对复航航线和复速时间进行了研究。当获取新的台风信息后，本文所设计的系统根据新的台风信息重新规划避台航线。本文将远洋船舶最佳避台航线设计系统在SCOM系统上进行实现，通过模拟实验证明了设计方案的正确性，并对误差的来源进行了总结和分析。
实验结果表明，该系统可以在一定程度上降低热带气旋对船舶营运的影响，提高船舶的安全性和经济性，能够满足船公司避台业务的实际需要。
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sirljz(金币+2): 2010-05-29 20:50:30
gaojiang109(金币+5):金币不多，聊表心意，谢谢了 2010-05-30 18:03:53
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Dozens of typhoons would happen every year in the world. Due to the devastating winds, heavy rainfall, billow and storm tide, typhoon is a major threat to ocean ships. The improper measures to evade typhoon often cause damage to ships and cargo, and even sink ships and kill people. The present research and application on typhoon evasion is deficient in china. In order to meet the shipping companies’ requirements on typhoon evasion, this paper relies on scientific and technological support of national projects "Ship and cargo online monitoring system (SCOM)"  to make researches on the Ocean Vessel's Optimum Route Designing Software System for Typhoon Evasion.
Accroding of  the present research analyzing status at home and abroad, this paper proposes the significance and purpose of the research. Combined with shipping companies’ requirements and principles on typhoon evasion, this paper uses track calculating method, target circle and radar plotting method to have researches on whether the ship needs to take action, the time and the measures to evade typhoon. In order to reduce the economic losses, this ship should return to the planned route or resume the planned speed at the proper time, so this paper studies on the route to return to the planed route and the time to resume the planed speed. After getting new typhoon information, the system should design new route to evade typhoon according to the new information. The Ocean Vessel's Optimum Route Designing Software System for Typhoon Evasion is implemented on the SCOM. This paper proves the correctness of the scheme and summarizes the sources of error by simulation experiments.
The experiment shows that the system can reduce typhoon’s impact on ship to some extent and ensure the economy and security of ship, so it meets the shipping companies’ requirements on typhoon evasion.
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sirljz(金币+1): 2010-05-29 20:50:36
gaojiang109(金币+5):谢谢了 2010-05-30 18:04:09
A Study on software (system) for ocean vessle's optimum route designing

Typhoon, which erupts more than 10 times worldwide, is a major threat to ocean ship due to the brought/ accompanied devastating winds, heavy rainfall, billow and storm tide. Because of improper measures to evade typhoon, it often happened that the ships and cargo were damaged and, more seriously, ships were sunk and crews dead. At present……

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wypward(金币+2):欢迎新虫来参与 2010-05-30 09:31:36
gaojiang109(金币+10, 翻译EPI+1):谢谢了 ，3ks 2010-05-30 18:00:15
in the world 改成 all over the world;
winds 去掉 s；而research and application则应当分别加-es和s，相应地，后面的is改成are；
propose 改成 discuss;
结合船公司在避台航线设计方面的实际需求以及航海中避台原则=Follow the principle of giving due consideration to both sides of the ship owner's requirements and the typhoon evasion;
"After getting new typhoon information, the system should design new route to evade typhoon according to the new information. "这句话相当地不爽，应改成“When new typhoon information was obtained, the system should renew the route to evade typhoon correspondingly.”
最后一句改成“The result of the experiment shown that the system can reduce typhoon’s impact on ship to some extent and might ensure the economy and secure the ship, ...”。
顺便提几个个忠告，时态上用过去式，语态上多用被动式。因为一论文表述的都是你做过的事情嘛，二语气显得比较客观。另外，你的中文摘要太不精练和顺畅了，这也给自己的英文翻译造成很大困惑。

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