[交流] 【外语交流】我爱英语之每周写作活动第一次月度评选已有81人参与

我爱英语之每周写作活动开展一个月以来，在众多虫友的热情支持下，在y区和几位版主的共同努力下，已经成功地完成了四周的活动。通过对生活中一些热点问题的广泛讨论，虫友们不仅达到了互相之间的交流，更加练习了大家的英语写作。学习英语，一要动口，二要动笔。我们就是希望通过组织一些大家感兴趣的话题，让大家把笔动起来。在以后的活动中，我们会更加努力组织，希望大家继续支持并提出一些好的建议和活动设想。因为有你的加入，我们的活动才更精彩！！

第一次月度评选，我们有四位候选人，通过大家投票，我们将选出：
第1名：50金，0.01vip  
第2名：50金，0.005vip
第3名：50金，0.001vip
第4名：20金。

1号，ID：mouyp  
Well, I just got this notice from the “water-pool”sector in the forum. With the first sight of the picture, actually I am a little shocked while I saw the last photo. Not referred to the profound meaning of the picture, it would be a funny cartoon to release myself after the busy morning emerging myself in numerous literatures.

    I am astonished and feel a little disappointed about our government. Maybe we cannot attribute all the causes to the plan and policy of the government from the central and others in all levels. The public, including me, however still insist on criticizing the whole strategy made by the central government. Student, whether you are a undergraduate, graduate or doctor, cannot isolate himself/herself from the society for the whole life long. So few things are as likely to make students exciting as that concerning the job. The student in the picture is not blameful if we take into account that the issue is the product of the complicated social problems concerning the huge population, economical crisis and something else.

    All the people who saw the picture may get into deep thought about how to deal with the issue. I recommend the suggestions below from the aspect of our students. First and foremost, we should keep one thing in our mind that the competent that we got in the university is the basic and simultaneously, the most important ability to complete in the future career with others. What’s more, don’t  indulge yourself in the games which cannot benefit yourself, time is precious in the university and do not comfort yourself that you can make up next day. Do it now and do it better. Last but not least, do not disparage the job that seems no-decent and simplistic, it is the first step that you walk into the society but not the only opportunity you can get in the future life.

   Well in the last paragraph, I should give my deep thanks to the opportunity offered by this English sector and the president ysm56789. And I am deeply grateful to those guys who will give modifications and recommendations to this essay.
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2号，ID：帅博士  
I love foreign movies and soap operas, especially, the American Soap operas and HOllywood movies. For example, I like the soap operas such as FRIENDS and PRISION BREAK, and the movies such as TITANIC and PEARL HARBOUR. For my part, these foreign TVS not only contribute to our English improving, but also fulfill our motonous life. As a case in point, in my spare time, I would like to watch TV shows and see movies-most of them are made by American-via my laptop. Certainly, most of them are free, because I download them form the internet. As a poverished Chinese students, I think it is the best way to acquire some foreign culture.
Acturally, I don't belive some of the stories being showed in the TVs or movies. You know, most of Hollywood movies are awashed with sex, violence and politics. Maybe, just as one of my oral teacher said, these movies are comercial products, and they are produced to make money. In other words, the sexy, violent and political anecodes are very attractive. Therefore, some of us may warry about the cultural erosion and penetration. Admittedly, some pornographic or violent moives and TVs may pose a threat to  Chinese young people' growing up.
However, I don't think it is the fault of the foreign cultre. More pricisely, some of the negative phenonmenon can attribute to the Chinese contridtional education. To illustrate, we want to curb the proliferation of some young students  addiction to Internet, and then the authorities adopt the method that most of school prohibit the students surfing online in the net-bars. Nevertheless, the regulations and rules of forbiddance had no serious effect on the prevalence of addictions to Internet.
This just a case of the point. I want to express that, just as some renowned ancient Chinese said, the best way to tackle the floods is unblocking the rivers but not holding back the flood waters. Maybe, I have gone too far to be meaningful. But I think it should be serious and thougtprovoking problem which should be paid more attention by our goverment.
From the personal pespective, I enjoy watching American movies, since  not only they boraden my horizons, but they ease my minds and, sometimes, give me inspirition in my study.
If you hold some diffirent views, please communicate with me via this bbs.
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3号 ID：qiguijin  
Looking at the photos above, I am shocked. So terrible! Then followed is my contemplation. Why did it happen? Actually, at my first thought, it is the God punishing our human beings.
The drought reminds me of the snowstorm, as well as the big earthquake in 2008, which claimed thousands of people`s lives and caused inestimable loss to our economy. Disasters followed one by one, we could hardly take our breath. I can`t help asking why should we have to suffer those miseries. Do we deserve it?
Well, to be sensible, we cannot deny that it is partially because of natural phenomena that would also occur in history. However, should we be out of blame to catastrophes just due to the scapegoat of Nature? Absolutely no! we cannot turn a blind eye to see miles of forest cut down every year, air pollution getting serious day by day, still there are illegally built factories…. We can name plenty of such ecological crimes committed by our human beings. No surprising to the outbreak of SARS,H1N1 and other epidemics.
However, it is those scourges that alarm the alarm bell of taking care of nature and amending our developing way to economy. And during those disasters a lot of moved stories happened and we have sensed the solidarity of our Chinese people. But, what is the essence solution is to take precautions before suffering a loss, no matter how well we performed in the rescue, we still suffered a great loss which has gone forever.
In conclusion, it is high time to take actions to save our living world, anyway better late that never. Only in this way can we have a bright future.
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4号 ID：dcb005
Tonight, I am so boring and upset. To calm down myself, I skimmed over the posts in ‘emuch’. By chance, I found this amazing thing in “English communication”, so, I want to be one of it.
I am not a critic, so, here, I just want to talk about the individual insight about ‘Yao’ and basketball. My first ‘touch’ with the basket ball was happened in high school periods, which was just the period of Jordon. From then on, I began to concern this sports. In 2002 draft, Yao was selected by the ‘Houston Rockets’ as the top pick overall pick of the draft. Till now, 8 years, He gave us too much pleasure, anger, sorrow, and joy. He became one of most recognizable athletes in international sports stage. Besides the NBA athlete, he also have another occupation—the boss of ‘Shanghai Sharks’.
I really agree and appreciate his judgment and decision. As we known, nobody can always be in one team throughout his life, especially, in NBA. Moreover, as a centre, the career is shorter than other players. Generally, they have to retire before 40 in NBA game. What should he do after 40? It’s a different decision for all athletes. Some players suffer privation after retirement. It’s a pity for the world champions, also the pity of sports undertaking. Of cause, there are also some athletes who were successful in other fields, such as Li Ning in trade, and Deng Yaping in sports. They all found a career to cover the left of his life, to make their dreams come true. Yao is also a wise man. He decided to buy a basketball team. I don’t know what will happen to this team in the future, but I know Yao have a positive life during the retiring times.
As a player, meanwhile as a boss, I don’t think it’s a problem for the clever Yao. He just do the things he should do, then he can make everything well. In NBA, he was just a player, followed the arrangement of coach. As a boss, he just find a person who is good at manage. Maybe his wife can do it. I heard that she was learning the manage course.
Ok, I’ll stop it. Thanks ‘emuch’ give us a platform for studying English. It’s a good pattern. I like it.
当期投票结果： http://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=1995139&fpage=1