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I'm afraid I must reject your submission for publication in Journal of Power Sources for unacceptable written English.

For your guidance, please find attached the reviewers' comments.

RE-SUBMISSION:  If you can GREATLY improve the English in the paper and address all of the review comments suggested by the reviewers, you may re-submit as a NEW PAPER and we may reconsider the paper.  IF you resubmit:
1)     You MUST make clear that it is a resubmission of this paper in the covering letter and ALSO enter "This is a resubmission of paper #_____ " (add the rejected paper number) in the author's "ENTER COMMENTS" box when submitting.  Each of the current reviewer criticisms must be answered in an accompanying letter (listing each reviewer comment and your answer and your correction) and,
2)     Changes made in response to the reviewers must be identified in the new text by highlighting with colour or by underlining.  
3)     NOTE: "A high standard of English is a criterion of acceptance for publication" or the paper will be rejected (http://ees.elsevier.com/power/default.asp). Help with the written English can be obtained from: http://www.elsevier.com/wps/find ... /languagepolishing)



Sincerely,



Reviewers' comments:


Review:

The manuscript presents interesting data on XXXX.  The subject matter of the manuscript is suitable for the Journal of Power Sources.  The English is very difficult to read and comprehend in places.  Some sentences are badly constructed and/or too long.  The manuscript needs to be revised before it can be accepted for publication in the Journal of Power Sources.
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