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[交流] 请大家帮忙分析一下审稿人的意见,主编给的大修,文章接收的可能性有多大已有15人参与

大家觉得这种意见的话,文章接收的可能性有多大
Reviewer #1: This paper dealt with the preparation and characterization of a new carboxymethyl chitin material synthesized from -chitin and the moisture absorption and retention ability of this material was investigated. Preparation of carboxymethyl chitin is not a new technology. The innovation of this paper is that the authors used-chitin instead of general -chitin to prepare this carboxymethyl chitin. So this paper has a scientific value to some extent. However, the comparison between the molecular structure and functional properties of the ordinary and-chitin derived carboxymethyl chitin should be made to see if the new one prepared here is better and why. The language and structure of this paper are acceptable generally except that some sentences should be revised according to the following suggestions. Therefore, this paper is acceptable for publication after complement and revision.

Line64,"a 40 g/100 g of aqueous NaOH solution of a specific amount" can be changed into " a specific amount of 40% (w/w) NaOH aqueous solution"
Line68, "by using a 20mL to 80 mL of mixed solution of 5 M of aqueous acetic acid solution to absolute alcohol." This sentence is quite difficult to understand. Does it mean " using 20-80 mL 5 M acetic acid in absolute alcohol"?
Line 85, please provide the type, producing place and country of the FT-IR spectrometer.
Line 198, in the sentence "CM-chitin with a high DS, a low DD, and a high molecular weight can be.", the three "a" can be deleted.
In the whole paper, please change ".by using." to "using."
In such sentences as " .g (or M etc.) of . solution", "of" can be deleted.
Try to avoid using numbers to start a sentence.

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rizhichen

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应该没什么问题
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felicity6056

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好好修改基本上没有什么问题的吧。
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dingzhijia

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好好修改,有很大希望的!
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yuer9809

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不管什么意见,我的观点是全力以赴
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melody

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So this paper has a scientific value to some extent. However, the comparison between
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zxt2001

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好好修该,很有希望哦,呵呵
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wenyou0621

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认真修改,关注好细节,基本是能接收的。
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ytinghost3

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好好修改,应该没问题!!
谎言与誓言的区别在于:一个是听的人当真了,一个是说的人当真了。
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wut2000

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这个得看编辑的决定吧,如果编辑让修改,那么接收的概率极大
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