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[交流] 修改稿回复问题！求助大家，真诚感谢您！已有22人参与

审稿人让我修改英语，我做了很多修改，小的或者大的修改，我需要按照下面的格式一一列举出来吗？
1.       Page 1, paragraph 1, the first sentence “Although there have been extensive investigations about the axisymmetric oscillation of free drops, few attempts were made about the more difficult case of non-axisymmetric oscillation.” is deleted.
2.       Page 1, paragraph 1, the second sentence “Here we report the excitation of the sectorial oscillation of water drops with acoustic levitation and active modulation method.” is modified to “We report experiments in which the non-axisymmetric sectorial oscillations of water drops have been excited using acoustic levitation and an active modulation method.”
3.       Page 1, paragraph 1, the last sentence “The frequency of sectorial oscillation for the oblate drop is found to depend strongly on its equatorial radius and can be formulated by a modified expression of Rayleigh equation.” is modified to “The data can be well described by a modified Rayleigh equation, without the use of additional parameters.”
4.       Page 4, paragraph 2, the first sentence, “less than 10 Hz wide” is added at the end of the sentence.
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