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投的第一篇英文期刊，一审的身高意见是大修，这是修完之后再审的意见：
>From: "David Reay" <D.A.Reay@hw.ac.uk>
>Reply-To:
>To: gmchen@zju.edu.cn
>Subject: Fwd:Your Submission
>Date: 10 Apr 2010 13:34:17 +0100
>
>Ms. Ref. No.:  ATE-2009-719R1
>Title: A Novel Absorption Refrigeration Cycle
>Applied Thermal Engineering
>
>Dear Dr. Guangming Chen,
>
>Reviewers have now commented on your paper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision.
>
>For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below.
>
>If you decide to revise the work, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point which is being raised when you submit the revised manuscript.
>
>To submit a revision, please go to http://ees.elsevier.com/ate/ and login as an Author.
>
>Your username is: gmchen
>If you need to retrieve password details, please go to: http://ees.elsevier.com/ate/automail_query.asp
>
>On your Main Menu page is a folder entitled "Submissions Needing Revision". You will find your submission record there.
>
>Yours sincerely,
>
>T.S. Zhao, PhD
>Regional Editor
>Applied Thermal Engineering
>
>Reviewers' comments:
>
>Reviewer #2: The authors have proposed a novel absorption refrigeration cycle with an expander-compressor in order to improve the performance of a conventional ammonia-water based absorption refrigeration cycle. The performance of the proposed system is compared to that of both single and two stage absorption refrigeration cycles.  The work is interesting and the authors have made significant improvement in this revised manuscript. I am recommending the acceptance of this paper after the authors made the following minor changes:
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>In Abstract
>Change "Simulation results show that the COP of new cycle" to "Simulation results show that the COP of the proposed cycle"
>Change "at most simulated working conditions" to "at the most simulated conditions"
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>In page #3, change "a much higher COP than conventional single effect absorption cycle" to "relatively higher COP value than that of the conventional single effect absorption cycle"
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>Provide full meaning of "CAC"
>In page #4, change "The proposed cycle is shown in figure 1, figure 2 and figure 3. Figure 1 shows
>Schematic diagram of the novel absorption cycle. Figure 2 shows P-T diagram of the novel absorption cycle. Figure 3 shows T-S diagram of the novel absorption cycle." to
>"The schematic, P-T diagram and T-S diagram of the proposed cycle are shown in figure 1, figure 2 and figure 3, respectively."
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>In the Mathematical Model section,
>ammonia mass balance equation is not considered for condenser, evaporator, valves, etc, which is correct. Statement should be given accordingly.
>Artwork quality of the schematic diagram should be improved.
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