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hsli

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The model proposed in the present study is site dependent, and it is needed regression coefficients for different locality, which is the weakness of our model and so as most empirical correlations are.

so as most empirical correlations are在这里用的对不对?

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gaijinhong

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要是把中文句子一块贴上就好了,这句话看不懂啊
2楼2010-03-26 10:58:33
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rektor2008

hsli(金币+1): 2010-03-30 20:19
How about the “which is the weakness of our model and so as most empirical correlations are.” is modified as "which is a common defect among the most empirical correlation methods. "
3楼2010-03-26 11:50:52
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pharmjackie

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hsli(金币+1): 2010-03-30 20:20
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Originally posted by hsli at 2010-03-26 10:35:33:
The model proposed in the present study is site dependent, and it is needed regression coefficients for different locality, which is the weakness of our model and so as most empirical co ...

第二小句的IT IS不应该有,显得重复累赘,读起来不顺口。建议改为:
The weakness of our model, as most emperical……are, lies in that it's site-dependent and needed regression cofficients for different locality.
4楼2010-03-26 12:51:40
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sammi_deng

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The model proposed in the present study is site dependent, and it is needed regression coefficients for different locality, which is the weakness of our model but as the most empirical correlations
5楼2010-03-26 18:28:29
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as2009xt

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把are去掉
6楼2010-03-27 14:54:30
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