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文章需要修改,其中一条意见是The assignment of the data in Table 1 should be improved
请问各位大侠这句话的意思是不是“在表1中的数据分配应改善”,也就是说我表中的数据的顺序要调整一下??
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xiaoqihu

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不一定
还得看原件
不是不追求,而是不强求
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Table 1. Effect of the alkalies on the condensation of chalcone with malononitrilea
Entry        Alkali        Reaction time (h)        Yield(%)b
1        —        6        40
2        NaOH        6        23
3        KOH        6        28
4        Na2CO3        6        67
5        K2CO3        2        95
                6        50c
6        NaHCO3        6        70
aMmol ration of chalcone/malononitrile/I2/alkali is 1.0/1.0/0.1/0.1. The reaction was accomplished in MeOH at room temperature;
bIsolated yields;
cWithout iodine.

下面是对应的分析
First, the condensation of chalcone with malononitrile using molecular iodine as catalyst was examined with several inorganic alkalies catalysts and the results are summarized in Table 1. As shown in Table 1, K2CO3 was more satisfied to obtain excellent yield in short time (entry 5) than other inorganic alkalies. Low yield was obtained and long reaction time was needed using NaOH and KOH as catalysts (entries 2 and 3), this owing to the NaOH and KOH were too strong bases to result in more by-products.[8f] Na2CO3 and NaHCO3 had moderate yields under the same reaction conditions (entries 4 and 6), and they both needed a longer reaction time than K2CO3. However, a long reaction time was needed and low yield was obtained without any base (entry 1) or molecular iodine (entry 5).

我觉得是顺序的问题,可能是我段中没有按1234的顺序分析。。望大家指教

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3楼2010-03-05 10:58:42
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xiaoqihu

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aaaa4564(金币+1):谢谢,呵呵 2010-03-05 11:14
还真看不出来为什么,最好给我看看你原始的图表样子
不过这里有个问题需要改

aMmol ratio of chalcone/malononitrile/I2/alkali
我觉得段落里面不需要再写出entry X了

[ Last edited by xiaoqihu on 2010-3-5 at 11:15 ]
不是不追求,而是不强求
4楼2010-03-05 11:11:23
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aaaa4564(金币+1):谢谢了 2010-03-05 18:45
我外行人同意楼主的观点,你的分析和表格中的内容排布应一致些,另外,你的粘帖的内容中的“6        50c”是对应的哪一个entry and alkli?
5楼2010-03-05 16:36:07
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我觉得是说你的标记等做的不好。需要改善
6楼2010-03-08 08:46:45
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