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Arear

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[交流] 请帮我看看这个摘要有什么问题,在线等,谢谢

Abstract: It is very important to study the effects of climate change and human activities on shallow groundwater level (SGL) for groundwater resources planning and utilizing sustainably in North China Plain (NCP). Took Wuqiao in NCP for example, this paper attempted to study this effect using BP artificial neural network (BP-ANN). With correlation analysis method first, precipitation, irrigation and pumping were found to be dominant influence factors for SGL in this district. For the next step of scenario analysis, a BP-ANN regress model was then established to depict the nonlinear relationship among annual difference of SGL (AD-SGL) and the three influence factors mentioned above. Three scenarios were considered in this study, namely human activities changed only due to change in climate (S1), human activities re-changed independently based on those caused by climate change (S2), and climate condition in next 40 years projected by GCMs (S3). For S1, annual precipitation changed by  and , and then annual irrigation and pumping volume vary with the precipitation accordingly. Another two BP-ANN models were built in this scenario to depict the precipitation-irrigation and precipitation-pumping mathematical relationships, with which we could calculate human activities induced by climate change.S2 were set to analyze the impact of independent-human activities on AD-GWL. For this scenario, annual irrigation and pumping volume would re-change -5% and -10% after climate-change-inducing changes in human activities in S1. For S3, future climate data were obtained from GCMS simulation results taking the consideration of the emissions scenarios of A1B, A2 and B1 (IPCC, 2001), and the two BP-ANN models built in S1 were also used to calculate climate-change-inducing changes in human activities. The results showed1)For S1, when the range of annual precipitation change was -10% to 10%, the change in AD-SGL was from -0.72m to-0.03 m.(2)For S2, AD-SGL was less than that in S1 due to the consideration of reduction of annual irrigation and pumping volume.(3) In the emissions scenarios of A1B, A2 and B1 (IPCC, 2001), AD-SGL would be -0.02m,-0.04m and -0.01m respectively, which indicated that if active measures were not adopted,SGL in this district in next 40 years would be decline continuously.
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Arear(金币+4): 2010-02-07 19:13
我只看了开头和结尾
开头:It is very important to study,

important我感觉用的不好

结尾
in this district in next 40 years would be decline continuously.
我感觉这句话好象应该在结论里说吧?


确实太长,建议你修改到100个单词以内.
4楼2010-02-05 22:32:50
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Arear(金币+2): 2010-02-07 19:13
Arear(金币+2): 2010-02-07 19:13
说句实在话,这是迄今为止我见过的最长的摘要。
不可否认,你的摘要很具体,很详细。但是有个问题你要弄明白,摘要是用来干吗的?先把这个问题弄清楚了,你这个摘要就好写了。
谁愿意去看这么长的摘要。纯属个人言论~!
2楼2010-02-05 19:06:31
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Ifany

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Arear(金币+2): 2010-02-07 19:13
同意LS看法,这摘要确实有点长...尽量浓缩下,语言简练点。
内容上写作目的,主要内容不明确,你得用一两句话告诉人家你研究什么的,然后再告诉人家你是怎么研究的。只有结果,没有结论性的话
建议去看看你要投的杂志的具体要求或者找几篇已经发表的多看看~~

嘿嘿我是新手 请多关照^^ 有说不对的地方请指正 共同进步哈~
3楼2010-02-05 22:17:04
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lengbingyu

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这个摘要确实有点问题,摘要主要说清楚你用什么方法研究了什么问题,主要创新之处是什么。强烈建议你重新组合!
抢节宁改,贞心自束
5楼2010-02-06 19:40:02
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