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Arear

木虫 (小有名气)

[交流] 请帮我看看这个摘要有什么问题,在线等,谢谢

Abstract: It is very important to study the effects of climate change and human activities on shallow groundwater level (SGL) for groundwater resources planning and utilizing sustainably in North China Plain (NCP). Took Wuqiao in NCP for example, this paper attempted to study this effect using BP artificial neural network (BP-ANN). With correlation analysis method first, precipitation, irrigation and pumping were found to be dominant influence factors for SGL in this district. For the next step of scenario analysis, a BP-ANN regress model was then established to depict the nonlinear relationship among annual difference of SGL (AD-SGL) and the three influence factors mentioned above. Three scenarios were considered in this study, namely human activities changed only due to change in climate (S1), human activities re-changed independently based on those caused by climate change (S2), and climate condition in next 40 years projected by GCMs (S3). For S1, annual precipitation changed by  and , and then annual irrigation and pumping volume vary with the precipitation accordingly. Another two BP-ANN models were built in this scenario to depict the precipitation-irrigation and precipitation-pumping mathematical relationships, with which we could calculate human activities induced by climate change.S2 were set to analyze the impact of independent-human activities on AD-GWL. For this scenario, annual irrigation and pumping volume would re-change -5% and -10% after climate-change-inducing changes in human activities in S1. For S3, future climate data were obtained from GCMS simulation results taking the consideration of the emissions scenarios of A1B, A2 and B1 (IPCC, 2001), and the two BP-ANN models built in S1 were also used to calculate climate-change-inducing changes in human activities. The results showed1)For S1, when the range of annual precipitation change was -10% to 10%, the change in AD-SGL was from -0.72m to-0.03 m.(2)For S2, AD-SGL was less than that in S1 due to the consideration of reduction of annual irrigation and pumping volume.(3) In the emissions scenarios of A1B, A2 and B1 (IPCC, 2001), AD-SGL would be -0.02m,-0.04m and -0.01m respectively, which indicated that if active measures were not adopted,SGL in this district in next 40 years would be decline continuously.
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tcs10

Arear(金币+2): 2010-02-07 19:13
Arear(金币+2): 2010-02-07 19:13
说句实在话,这是迄今为止我见过的最长的摘要。
不可否认,你的摘要很具体,很详细。但是有个问题你要弄明白,摘要是用来干吗的?先把这个问题弄清楚了,你这个摘要就好写了。
谁愿意去看这么长的摘要。纯属个人言论~!
2楼2010-02-05 19:06:31
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Ifany

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Arear(金币+2): 2010-02-07 19:13
同意LS看法,这摘要确实有点长...尽量浓缩下,语言简练点。
内容上写作目的,主要内容不明确,你得用一两句话告诉人家你研究什么的,然后再告诉人家你是怎么研究的。只有结果,没有结论性的话
建议去看看你要投的杂志的具体要求或者找几篇已经发表的多看看~~

嘿嘿我是新手 请多关照^^ 有说不对的地方请指正 共同进步哈~
3楼2010-02-05 22:17:04
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理工光学

木虫 (正式写手)

Arear(金币+4): 2010-02-07 19:13
我只看了开头和结尾
开头:It is very important to study,

important我感觉用的不好

结尾
in this district in next 40 years would be decline continuously.
我感觉这句话好象应该在结论里说吧?


确实太长,建议你修改到100个单词以内.
4楼2010-02-05 22:32:50
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lengbingyu

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这个摘要确实有点问题,摘要主要说清楚你用什么方法研究了什么问题,主要创新之处是什么。强烈建议你重新组合!
抢节宁改,贞心自束
5楼2010-02-06 19:40:02
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Arear

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各位误会了,是会议论文要求300-500字的摘要
6楼2010-02-07 19:11:39
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jinjin1996

改了一下,请大家指点指点,楼主自己再斟酌斟酌……

Arear(金币+10): 2010-02-14 12:02
Arear(金币+2): 2010-03-23 15:27
        This paper presents a case study of the effects of climate change and human activities on shallow groundwater level (SGL) in Wuqiao in North China Plain (NCP) using BP artificial neural network (BP-ANN) in order to inform a sustained policy for the utilization of groundwater in North China Plain (NCP). An initial correlation analysis shows that precipitation, irrigation and pumping are dominant factors with respect to SGL in this district. These factors are then precisely calculated, with the help of a BP-ANN regression model, of their effects on SGL (AD-SGL). Three scenarios considered are human activities directly linked to the climate (S1), human activities changed as a result of the climate (S2), and the next-40-year climate condition predicted by GCMs (S3). S1 looks at three correlative annual variations between precipitation and the volume consumed by irrigation and pumping taken as a whole, between precipitation and that of irrigation, and between precipitation and that of pumping. S2 measures the annual impact of human activities on AD-GWL excluding what has been examined in S1. S3 obtains climate data from GCMS simulation, taking the emission scenarios of A1B, A2 and B1 (IPCC, 2001) into consideration, following basically the same method used in S1. The results are listed as follows: (1) for S1, the change in AD-SGL shifts between -0.72m to-0.03 m. as the annual precipitation vacillates between -10% to 10%; (2) for S2, the AD-SGL will become less than that in S1 due to reduced irrigation and pumping volume; (3) for S3, A1B, A2 and B1 (IPCC, 2001) will be -0.02m,-0.04m and -0.01m, respectively. The conclusion is that SGL in this district will decline continuously in the next 40 years if no efficient and effective measures are taken.
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7楼2010-02-13 00:32:11
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Arear

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版主,我要撤金币

我要撤金币,版主帮忙
8楼2010-03-23 15:28:52
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sunpixy

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摘要太长,而且一般性东西较多,着重介绍你这篇文章的研究成果是主要的工作,现对于研究的意义和背景可以在Introduction中介绍。
9楼2010-03-23 15:42:30
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Arear

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是个extend abstract
10楼2010-03-23 16:05:23
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