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A HAPPY DAY One Sunday morning, my father, my mother and I went to the X Park by car. After we came to the garden, we can see many flowers, red flowers, yellow flowers and white flowers. Some butterflies were playing and dancing up and down. Some birds were singing sweetly. Then we went to the zoo. In the zoo, we can see many animals, like tigers, panda, zebras and monkeys. The baby elephant named “xixi” was very lovely. Suddenly I saw my classmate Zhao Qin. I said: “How nice to meet you”. When it was 12 o’clock, I was hungry. We went to KFC. I like to eat Hamburg, hotdog and ice cream. We had a good lunch. On afternoon, I asked “Can we go to the supermarket？” Dad said “ok”. In the supermarket, we bought many fruits and food. I brought a T-shirt, It looks very smart. When I was tired, I said “Let’s go home”. I had a happy day. |
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