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bjlumang

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[交流] Journal of Hazardous Materials大修,好狠

JHM太狠了吧,就这么几条意见,就要我大修,这可是我头一次大修呢,本人博士期间发表的SCI6、7篇,也就这篇大修了,其它都中修或小修,包括两个比JHM更好的刊物。

Dear 。。。, The review of your manuscript, 。。。。, submitted to Journal of Hazardous Materials has been completed. The reviewers recommend the need for major revisions.

Reviewer #1

This paper of 。。et al. is written in a clear language. The experimental methods used include batch tests and spectroscopic analyses and the results demonstrated the potential application of Fenton-like reagent to treat soil contaminated by petroleum. However, the paper could be strengthened if the authors address the following comments:
1.        Soil organic matter (SOM) can also react to H2O2 in the Fenton reagent. Actually, H2O2 treatment has been a general method to remove soil organic matter (SOM) for soil mineralogical analyses (Soukup et al. 2008). Because the H2O2 consumption capacity of SOM was not considered by the authors, all the experimental results could be significantly interfered by the existence of SOM.
2.        The IR spectra in Figure 3 are not clear. I would suggest the authors plot the spectra in absorbance mode and indicate the wavenembers for major peaks (accordingly, Figure S4 can be eliminated). Meanwhile, the IR spectra need to be calibrated or normalized to be quantitative.
3.        The sections 4 in the supporting information seems to be redundant.

Reviewer #2: This is an interesting and well written paper. I would like to suggest to the authors to briefly discuss the economic aspects of the Fenton-like oxidation in the optimum conditions identified in this study. I have no other modifications to suggest.

[ Last edited by bjlumang on 2009-11-7 at 19:50 ]
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头一次大修? 下次应该投更高档的杂志啊!文章让大修(然后接收)最值。。。
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Originally posted by bjlumang at 2009-11-7 18:26:
JHM太狠了吧,就这么几条意见,就要我大修,这可是我头一次大修呢。

Dear 。。。, The review of your manuscript, 。。。。, submitted to Journal of Hazardous Materials has been completed. The reviewer ...

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suchanghong

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lz厉害,大修都要抱怨。编辑给个大修我都高兴的屁颠屁颠的啦。
3楼2009-11-07 19:28:16
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kingsong

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hehe. 其实第一个人的第一条建议不好办。
我猜你研究了反应的动力学或者H2O2的降解,但是只考虑了Fe的影响,这里却要你考虑到SOM的影响,严格来说你的相关讨论都应该修正。
所以叫大修也正常。
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bjlumang

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Originally posted by kingsong at 2009-11-7 21:35:
hehe. 其实第一个人的第一条建议不好办。
我猜你研究了反应的动力学或者H2O2的降解,但是只考虑了Fe的影响,这里却要你考虑到SOM的影响,严格来说你的相关讨论都应该修正。
所以叫大修也正常。

兄弟真乃行家呀,一看就知道。兄弟你说我是否需要补充有关SOM消耗H2O2的实验数据和讨论?
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longwave

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楼主你就在这的色吧,小心扣你奖金,哈哈哈
我什么都不说,路过看看!
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bjlumang

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Originally posted by longwave at 2009-11-7 22:39:
楼主你就在这的色吧,小心扣你奖金,哈哈哈

不明白什么意思,你这话
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lwt408

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等你投的文章多了,还会碰到被拒呢。
认真/刻苦/毅力
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楼主牛人。顺便借宝地祝福俺刚刚under review的JHM文章
RPisalwaysinbalance
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