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lssnoopy148881

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[交流] 求高手帮我看一下这几句话翻译得好不好

摘要  有机硒药物是一类新型的化合物,由于其具有抗病毒、抗肿瘤以及治疗神经疾病等方面的作用,成为药物研究的热点。近年来新报道的药理活性还有抗炎、抗衰老、防治心血管疾病及预防肝病等方面的作用。由于硒具有独特的生化、药理性质,因此开发含硒类药物极具意义。本文就近年来有机硒潜在药物的研究进展进行综述。
关键词  硒;有机硒化合物;硒研究进展

Abstract:Organoselenium drug is a new family of compounds. Due to its anti-virus, anti-cancer and treatment of neurological diseases and so on, organoselenium compounds have become the hot spot in drug research. In recent years, there much more organoselenium pharmacology activities are reported, such as anti-inflammatory, anti-aging, cardiovascular disease prevention and cure and liver ailment prevention, et al. Its unique chemical and biological property makes the organoselenium drug development especially meaningful. The purpose of this review is to summarize the progress in potential organoselenium drug.
Key Words: selenium; organoselenium; advance in organoselenium drug research
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yzhang1986

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lssnoopy148881(金币+1,VIP+0): 11-1 19:22
much more organoselenium pharmacology activities are reported,
我觉得挺好的
2楼2009-11-01 12:43:31
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shaojh

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lssnoopy148881(金币+1,VIP+0): 11-1 19:25
不要直译,感觉不符合英语国家表达习惯。
做一个进取的人
3楼2009-11-01 12:58:35
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mdzhao

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lssnoopy148881(金币+1,VIP+0): 11-1 19:25
同意楼上的,感觉在表达上比较生硬。
4楼2009-11-01 16:02:23
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龙笑九天

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lssnoopy148881(金币+1,VIP+0): 11-1 19:25
我们写摘要的时候,老师就要求不要按照中文直接直译过来,因为,中国人习惯铺垫,说半天到最后才是重点,而外国人则喜欢开门见山,一些客套话直接省略。
所以我的建议是直接开门见山: 本文是作者关于什么话题的一个综述,为什么选择这个话题,这样铺开比较好

个人意见,仅供参考
5楼2009-11-01 18:25:26
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syh9288

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海军上将

一点具体的修改意见

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lssnoopy148881(金币+2,VIP+0): 11-1 22:21
第三行:there are much more activities of organoselenium's pharmacology which have been reported
第五行:make the research of the organoselenium drug meaningful
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6楼2009-11-01 20:58:31
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齐8783

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Organoselenium drug is a new kind of compounds. Due to their anti-virus, anti-cancer and treatment of neurological diseases and so on, organoselenium compounds have become the hot spot in drug research. In recent years, there are much more organoselenium pharmacology activities  reported, such as anti-inflammatory, anti-aging, cardiovascular disease prevention and cure and liver ailment prevention, et al. Its unique chemical and biological properties make the organoselenium drug development especially meaningful. The purpose of this review is to summarize the progress in potential organoselenium drug.
Key Words: selenium; organoselenium; advance in organoselenium drug research
只改了一下语法。但是按照摘要的写法,应该重点描述本文的内容,而不是大众共知的信息。前面的信息喧宾夺主。翻译太Chinese。
7楼2009-12-03 17:50:27
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