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Reviewer #3: the results had been well stated.

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6. Have the authors clearly emphasized the strengths of their study/theory/methods/argument?

Reviewer #1: They clearly described their strength of the study,

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7. Have the authors clearly stated the limitations of their study/theory/methods/argument?


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8. Does the manuscript structure, flow or writing need improving (e.g., the addition of subheadings, shortening of text, reorganization of sections, or moving details from one section to another)?

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