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000zgh000

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[交流] 帮忙看一下这几个句子有没有问题

1. Like other malignant diseases, polygenes involvement coupled with accumulation of genetic and epigenetic changes make the high mortality rate without markedly changed.
2.  HCC often coupled with liver dysfunction restrict the use of conventional chemotherapeutics as there are more or less non-selective toxicity with significant systemic side effects.
请大侠们帮俺看看这两个句子有问题吗,如果有,怎么修改啊,急急急……非常感谢哈……!!!
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goodtimega

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linghanyuan(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢交流 9-14 20:22
1. Similar to other malignant diseases, the involvement of  polygenes coupled with the accumulation of genetic and epigenetic changes yields high mortality rate without significant change.
2.  HCC coupled with liver dysfunction restricts the use of conventional chemotherapeutics, for there is more or less non-selective toxicity of systemic side effects.
5楼2009-09-14 20:06:37
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yuyang031985

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000zgh000(金币+1,VIP+0): 9-14 09:03
linghanyuan(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢交流 9-14 14:06
1. Like other malignant diseases, polygenes involvement coupled with the accumulation of genetic and epigenetic changes result in the high mortality rate, which was not changed significantly.
2.  HCC often coupled with liver dysfunction restricts the use of conventional chemotherapeutics, for there is more or less non-selective toxicity of systemic side effects.

看看吧,做了部分调整
说说你不开心的事让我们开心一下哈!
2楼2009-09-14 08:57:39
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linghanyuan(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢交流 9-14 20:21
Following the 2nd floor:

1. Like other malignant diseases, polygenes involvement coupled with the accumulation of genetic and epigenetic changes results in the high mortality rate, which was not changed significantly.

(result in => results in?)
4楼2009-09-14 20:01:18
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seebrightplan

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linghanyuan(金币+1,VIP+0):鼓励交流 9-25 15:28
1. Like other malignant diseases, the involvement of the polygenes involvement coupled with the accumulation of genetic and epigenetic changes results in high mortality rate with neglected changing.
2.  HCC often coupled with liver dysfunction restricts the use of the conventional chemotherapeutics since there ismore or less non-selective toxicity with significant systemic side effects.
只此一生莫听穿林打叶声,何妨吟啸且徐行。竹杖芒鞋轻胜马,谁怕?一蓑烟雨任平生。料峭春风吹酒醒,微冷,山头斜照却相迎。回首向来萧瑟处,归去,也无风雨也.
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