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The written English of the revised paper is still not acceptable for publication in this Journal so we must reject the revised paper. Please read the Guide for Authors - the first section clearly states: "A high standard of English is a criterion of acceptance for publication" (http://ees.elsevier.com/power/default.asp)
You were specifically asked to improve the written English. You MUST get a professional English writing service to correct the text.  (e.g: http://www.elsevier.com/wps/find ... languagepolishing). "USING A FRIEND" IS NOT ACCEPTABLE!!!! The revised technical material is now satisfactory.  If you can greatly improve the written English you may resubmit the paper for rapid processing as follows:

RE-SUBMISSION:  Re-submit as a NEW PAPER using the Journal website and make it clear that it is a resubmission of this paper in the covering letter and ALSO enter "This is a resubmission of paper #_____ " (add the rejected paper number) in the author's "ENTER COMMENTS" box when submitting.  YOU MUST HIGHLIGHT the changes in English in the new text with colour or by underlining.

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