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[求助] 新手第一次写套磁信,麻烦各位前辈批评指正

看了好多教程,套了一些自认为还可以的句子,但是还是感觉写的不好,麻烦大家帮忙看一下~
楼主今年国内博二在读,因一些原因,想退学申请欧洲phd。

Dear Prof. XX,  

Hope this email finds you well.

My name is XX. I am a 2rdyear ongoing PhD student in XX. Previously, I obtained my master degree in Power Engineering, and bachelor degree in Software Engineering from XX. I am sending this email for inquiring if is it possible for me to pursue a PhD under your supervision in your group.

My current PhD research work primarily lies in XX. This research aims to solve the problem of XX. However, I found that my current research work is not very practical, the signal acquisition device is not convenient, the accuracy is not high, and it lacks feedback mechanism. Therefore, I am looking for other PhD positions to continue my research. I have visited your research articles and found my field of interest in your research area. Particularly, I am quite interested in one of your research work on XXX.

For your reference, I have attached my CV and the abstract of my master thesis. During my two-year study, I have been programming and reading papers a lot, so I believe I have a solid research foundation, and be able to get into the new research work in short.

I would quite appreciate it if we could deal an online meeting for more communication. Thanks!  

Sincerely,  
XXX
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hwp19891031

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不要写自己国内博士在读
倚楼听风雨,淡看江湖路。
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个人感觉想换职位的原因不够有说服力,看起来就像是遇到了问题然后就想换职位,但做研究总是会不断的遇到各种各样的问题

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mkblbj

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2楼: Originally posted by 春蚕化蛹 at 2022-04-24 18:18:59
个人感觉想换职位的原因不够有说服力,看起来就像是遇到了问题然后就想换职位,但做研究总是会不断的遇到各种各样的问题

确实!感谢,有什么建议么。
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4楼: Originally posted by hwp19891031 at 2022-04-25 20:03:45
不要写自己国内博士在读

那这段经历,怎么描述呢~

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