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[交流] 【求助完毕】60金币求助各位高手进行一段摘要及结论的润色. 多谢关注！

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Composting is an effective pretreatment technology for pig manure (PM) land application. However, nitrogen loss through NH3 volatilization during the thermophilic stage is one of the major drawbacks of composting. The presence of Cu and Zn in compost which come from pig feed additives is also a trouble. In this study bamboo charcoal (BC) and bamboo vinegar (BV) were added into composting piles to investigate their effects on nitrogen conservation and immobility of Cu and Zn during PM composting. During composting, total Kjeldahl nitrogen (TKN) loss decreased with the increasing amount of BC addition and appropriate combinative addition of BV. After composting, TKN loss could be decreased most by 74% with the addition of 3% BC + 0.4% BV, compared with control. Mobility of Cu and Zn also decreased with the increasing amount of BC. The combinative addition of BV could further enhance the immobilization of Cu and Zn. Mobility of Cu and Zn could be decreased most by 35 and 39%, respectively, with 9% BC addition, compared with control. Results of the experiment indicated that adding of BC or BC + BV into PM composting material could be an effective method to reduce TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn.

Conclusions:
The addition of BC or BC + BV into PM composting material influenced the parameter changes. It shorted the time to entering thermophilic phase, decreased pH value at the thermophilic phase, and increased GI of the composting material. Mainly the addition of BC or BC + BV reduced TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn in PM composting material. TKN loss could be reduced most by 74% in treatment 3% BC + 0.4% BV. Mobility of Cu and Zn could be reduced most by 35 and 39% in treatment 9% BC. This indicated that the addition of BC or BC + BV into PM composting material were an effective method to reduce negative effects in PM composting.

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xuedong78(金币+1,VIP+0):感谢关注 9-7 13:54
Too complicated.
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xuedong78(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢您的建议 9-7 14:55
是不是分开悬赏好一些呢？
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凡是对摘要或结论进行润色的各位均可获得答谢

凡是对摘要或结论进行润色的各位均可获得金币，每个虫友润色一部分我都会赠送5-10个金币答谢
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xuedong78(金币+10,VIP+0):非常感谢热心相助，有些地方改得很好。不过还有几个问题再请教一下：1.我用到most是想说该处理下效果最佳，因为我有多个处理而在摘要里面没有体现出来。2.在这里我用control是表示对照处理的意思，是不是用control treatment会较好？3.因为我的试验已经表明BC和BC+BV的效果较好，所以在”Results of the experiment indicated that adding [of] BC or BC + BV into PM composting material [could be an effective method] has great potential to reduce TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn.“中是不是改为”Results of the experiment indicated that adding BC or BC + BV into PM composting material was an effective methodl to reduce TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn“更合适？ 9-7 19:29
Abstract如下，方括号表删除。

Abstract :
Composting is an effective pretreatment technology for pig manure [(PM)]所有abbreviation都挪到正文里 land application. However, nitrogen loss through NH3 volatilization during the thermophilic stage is one of the major drawbacks of composting.[The] Presence of Cu and Zn in compost [which come] from pig feed additives [is also a trouble] still remains a challenge. In this study, bamboo charcoal (BC) and bamboo vinegar (BV) were added into composting piles, to investigate and their effects on nitrogen conservation and immobility of Cu and Zn during PM composting were investigated. During composting, total Kjeldahl nitrogen (TKN) loss decreased with the increasing amount of BC addition and appropriate combinative addition of BV. After composting, TKN loss could be decreased [most] by 74% with the addition of 3% BC + 0.4% BV, compared with control少东西吧？. Mobility of Cu and Zn also decreased with the increasing amount of BC. The combinative addition of BV could further enhance the immobilization of Cu and Zn. Mobility of Cu and Zn could be decreased most by 35% and 39%, respectively, with 9% BC addition, compared with control同上，control啥？. Results of the experiment indicated that adding [of] BC or BC + BV into PM composting material [could be an effective method] has great potential to reduce TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn.
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xuedong78(金币+1,VIP+0):多谢啊 9-7 21:27
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xuedong78(金币+5,VIP+0):多谢谢解答 9-7 21:26
xuedong78(金币+3,VIP+0):再次感谢，祝工作顺利 9-8 10:23
不过还有几个问题再请教一下：1.我用到most是想说该处理下效果最佳，因为我有多个处理而在摘要里面没有体现出来。2.在这里我用control是表示对照处理的意思，是不是用control treatment会较好？3.因为我的试验已经表明BC和BC+BV的效果较好，所以在”Results of the experiment indicated that adding [of] BC or BC + BV into PM composting material [could be an effective method] has great potential to reduce TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn.“中是不是改为”Results of the experiment indicated that adding BC or BC + BV into PM composting material was an effective methodl to reduce TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn“更合适？

1. 可以考虑用the highest reduction/decrease in *** was ***

2. 可以考虑compared with another experiment where control treatment was implemented.

3. 如果已经肯定了，那就不要用could之类的助词，那样会显得结果比较弱。
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xuedong78(金币+10,VIP+0):佩服，改得很好，虽然你没看到我的正文，但结合已有信息很好的体现了我的试验结果 9-7 21:21
下面是conclusions部分的修改。

Our experimental results show that addition of BC or BC + BV into PM composting material has a great impact on parameter changes (最好说明一下是什么parameters), and it leads to reduced time to enter the thermophilic phase, decreased pH value at the thermophilic phase, and increased GI of the composting material. The addition of BC or BC + BV is proved to be the dominant factor for reduced TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn in PM composting material. The largest loss observed in TKN was 74% in treatment 3% BC + 0.4% BV, whilst the highest reduction in mobility of Cu and Zn was 35% and 39% in treatment 9% BC, respectively. This indicates that the addition of BC or BC + BV into PM composting material is an effective method to reduce negative effects in PM composting.
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xuedong78(金币+20,VIP+0):同样很感激热心相助，好些地方在我看来都很精彩。有些地方还需向您请教：1.abstract:remains an issue，issue是不是不常用啊，我想表达类似“猪粪堆肥中的铜、锌有其环境安全隐患是个麻烦”的意思。2.abstract: substituted into好像不太合适，我想表达“加入”3.abstrace 中decreasing up to及conclusion 中reduces up to 的up to,我想表达增加或减少了多少，是不是应该用by啊？再次谢谢相助 9-7 22:32
xuedong78(金币+9,VIP+0):感谢您的回复 9-8 10:22
Abstract :
Composting is an effective pretreatment technology for pig manure land application. However, nitrogen loss through NH3 volatilization during the thermophilic stage is one of the major drawbacks of composting. The presence of Cu and Zn in compost arising from pig feed additives remains an issue. In the present study the efect of bamboo charcoal and bamboo vinegar substituted into composting piles on nitrogen conservation and immobility of Cu and Zn during PM composting is investigated. During composting, total Kjeldahl nitrogen loss decreases with the increasing amount of BC addition and appropriate combinative BV addition. After composting, TKN loss decreases by 74% with the addition of 3% BC + 0.4% BV. Correspondingly mobility of Cu and Zn decreases with the increasing amount of BC. The combinative addition of BV further enhances the immobilization of Cu and Zn, with the associated mobility of Cu and Zn decreasing up to 35 and 39%, respectively, in accordance with 9% BC addition. Results of the experiment indicate that adding of BC or BC + BV into PM composting material stands for an effective method to reduce TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn.

Conclusions:
The addition of BC or BC + BV into PM composting material influenced the parameter changes. It reduces the time to entering thermophilic phase, decreases pH value at the thermophilic phase, and increases GI of the composting material. The predominant addition of BC or BC + BV reduces TKN loss and mobility of Cu and Zn in PM composting material. TKN loss reduces up to 74% in treatment 3% BC + 0.4% BV. Mobility of Cu and Zn reduces up to 35 and 39% in treatment 9% BC. This indicates that the addition of BC or BC + BV into PM composting material constitutes an effective method to reduce negative effects in PM composting.
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