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Editor's Comments:
As you will see from the comments of the referee, this manuscript is not deemed appropriate as Little Gems column article. The referee does indicate that it has promise as a regular article, but only after improvements have been made with regard to the grammar and language; my own thoughts are in line with this assessment, but I am not comfortable sending this version out for further expert external review as a regular article until it has been completely revised and improvements in the language have been made. (As an example of where improvements are necessary, the first two sentences suffer from grammar problems, so much so that they are difficult to interpret.) Furthermore, the most recent citation in your manuscript is from 2002; several Arduino based papers have appeared in the literature since then, at least one of which is likely to be relevant, so your manuscript should be rewritten after studying that literature. Finally, it would be useful to see more detail about how you use this in your own class or lab setting, and to see a sample of the data over a range of depths of water (or perhaps other fluids) so that others can assess whether they want to invest energy in mimicking your setup, so please consider how you might include those ideas in your revised manuscript also.

Should you wish to pursue publication of this work in TPT further, then it will be important to revise your manuscript along the lines suggested above; I will then strive to find suitable expert reviewers to further assess your submission. Thank you for your consideration.



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Reviewer Comments:
Reviewer #1 Evaluations:
The paper contributes to the teaching of introductory physics.: Yes
The material is correct as written.: Yes
The material is novel (not common knowledge or readily available).: Yes
The level of presentation is appropriate for readers of TPT.: Yes
The quality of the writing (clarity of presentation) is acceptable.: Doubtful
A thorough literature search has been done as eviden
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