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kang0329

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[交流] 【求助完毕】高手帮我看看这句话翻译的对不对(截止8月20号))

高手帮我看看这句话翻译的对不对,有无语法毛病,最好帮我改改,本人英语太烂。谢谢

汉语:结果表明,纳米复合材料UV谱线随着ω值的增加峰逐渐红移,粒径随着ω值的增大而增加,纳米复合材料的导电性随着ω值的增加而提高,而饱和磁化强度和矫顽力变化较小。

With the increase of ω value, the absorption peak of UV-vis absorption spectrum of nanocomposites showed a gradual red shift; the particle size of nanocomposites increased; the conductivity enhanced; while the saturation magnetization and the coercivity changed slightly.

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pitlord999

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kang0329(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 8-17 22:58
改成现在时态吧,因为你的结果揭示的应该是可复现的一般规律

As the w value rises, the absorption peak of UV-vis absorption spectrum of nanocomposites exhibits a gradual red shift, the particle size of nanocomposites increases, conductivity is enhanced, but little change has been observed in the saturation magnetization and the coercivity.
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linghanyuan

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kang0329(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢 8-17 22:58
个人感觉,句法有点单调,而且呈现头重脚轻的现象,加入合理的连接词,能使句式更通顺
我这人不太懂音乐,所以时而不靠谱,时而不着调。
3楼2009-08-17 22:33:46
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goodtimega

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linghanyuan(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢交流,很不错 8-18 08:57
kang0329(金币+2,VIP+0):非常感谢 8-18 09:20
With the increase of ω value, the absorption peak of UV-vis absorption spectrum of nanocomposites shows a gradual red shift, along with increased particle size of nanocomposites and enhanced conductivity. On the other hand, there is little change in the saturation magnetization and the coercivity.
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ghostbaichunqi

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kang0329(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 8-20 21:33
the result showed that the UV peak of nanocomposites was gradually away from infrared,and that granule diameter or conductivity was increased, with ω value added .on the contrary,there is little change in the saturation magnetization and the coercivity.

另:你的红移现象表达不明确,红移现在好像有几种呢,应具体
5楼2009-08-20 21:00:49
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