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jkdh

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[交流] 【求助完毕】求助一句话的翻译表达及语法问题

下面这句话总觉得表达或语法有问题,请高手指教。
中国采用的环境政策工具从主要依赖命令控制干预向更多的使用经济刺激手段转变。

The environmental policy instruments adopted by Chinese government shift from mainly relying on command-and-control regulations towards a more using of market incentive tools.

[ Last edited by jkdh on 2009-8-12 at 09:11 ]

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jkdh(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 8-12 09:10
The approach of the environmental policy adopted by Chinese government is shifting from mainly relying on command-and-control regulations towards increasingly market incentive tools.
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pitlord999

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linghanyuan(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢交流 8-11 18:52
jkdh(金币+3,VIP+0):谢谢你的建议 8-12 09:08
翻的挺好的啊,唯一的问题在towards a more using中的a,去掉就perfect了
或者改成towards a means of more using of ...
2楼2009-08-11 17:43:35
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linghanyuan(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢交流 8-11 21:20
jkdh(金币+2,VIP+0):不错,谢谢 8-12 09:09
The environmental policy instruments adopted by Chinese government has been shiftting from the style of mainly relying on command-and-control regulations towards another which employs more of market incentive tools
3楼2009-08-11 20:39:43
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linghanyuan(金币+1,VIP+0):鼓励新虫 8-11 21:20
jkdh(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢你的建议 8-12 09:10
The tools adopted by Chinese government for the environment (policy) have been shifted from predominantly command-and-control regulations towards market-sensitive ones.
4楼2009-08-11 21:17:47
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