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zhaosong6638

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Comments to the Author
Dear Authors,
I have reviewed the manuscript PB-09-0307 “Synthesis and Reaction Kinetics Model of Suspension Phase Grafting Polypropylene with Dual Monomers”.
The paper submitted is related to studies in an interesting field of polymer chemistry-suspension phase for synthesis of grafted copolymers. I recommend publication, but I suggest some revisions to understand.

1. I think the introduction should be rewritten to clearly understand your manuscript.
2. For validation, data analysis should be accompanied with statistical data such as standard deviation. How many times did you repeat the experimental work for each parameter? The series of data should be presented in an average and stated with standard deviation.
3. The relationship of Reaction Kinetics Model and Synthesis should be better described.
4. The references is not enough.

Sincerely,


Reviewer: 2
Comments to the Author
The manuscript under consideration is quite interesting from a scientific point of view. However, I have some remarks concerning the content and presentation of the results. 1) Authors should make clear the experimental conditions of the suspension polymerization reaction for preparing PP-g-MAH-St studied.
2) Authors have to correct the figures accordingly to the instructions for authors of the journal.
3) I do not really understand why authors consider that diffution of monomers and other agents occurs from liquid phase just into the amorphous phase of PP grain? I consider that additional investigation of grafted polymers by using DSC method can clarify this questions.
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Originally posted by zhaosong6638 at 2009-7-24 13:24:
4. The references is not enough. 是不是要多写几篇审稿人的作者,怎么知道审稿人是谁呀

也不是吧,可能是不是觉得你的参考文献有点老。我们无法知道审稿人就不用管那些事情了。加一些参考文献,然后在说明中写出:我添加了一些新的文献,其中包括……,不知是否合适之类的话就OK了
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zhaosong6638(金币+1):谢谢参与
呵呵,重新改写下文章
我什么都不说,路过看看!
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4. The references is not enough. 是不是要多写几篇审稿人的作者,怎么知道审稿人是谁呀
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zhaosong6638(金币+1):谢谢参与
我只看了第一个审稿意见,觉得很好修改啊,没有必须要求怎么做,你根据他的要求认真的做些修改,然后搞个说明就行!审稿人写出这样的审稿意见是因为他没有发现文章有什么硬伤,又觉得直接录用不太合适,所以随便找些意见说说。

恭喜&Bless!
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