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mlzalft

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第一次审稿,麻烦看看审稿意见中是否有语法等问题,多谢!
注:科威特人的文章,写得很罗嗦且没有条理,创新性也不够,感觉应该拒掉,不给修改的机会了。

The manuscript describes the desulfurization process for dibenzothiophenes in an organic two-phase liquid-liquid extraction system by a combination of extraction and oxidation. Although it is necessary to desulfurize from oil, I do not recommend the publication of this paper in in a high profile journal such as Energy and Fuels based below reasons:
1.The presented NMP, DMF ACN as extractants and hydrogen peroxide and acetic/formic acid as oxidants have already been proposed by many references (such as Otsuki,Energy & Fuels 2000, 14, 1232-1239;Toteva, Fuel Processing Technology , 2009, 90,  965–970; Sampanthar, Appl. Cata. B:Environ. 2006, 63, 85-93; Matsuzawa, Journal of Photochemistry and Photobiology A: Chemistry, 2002, 149, 183–189; Zhao, Energy & Fuels 2007, 21, 2543-2547; Li, green chem. 2009, 11, 883-888). I therefore must say that the novelty of this manuscript is low.
2. The manuscript presented the well-known oxidative route of DBT, but there was lack of the products of DBT to support the mechnism. So the presented route is meaningless.
3. Please notice that the words in the paper should be consistent and proper. Such as, “desulfurization” and “desulphurization”. And “thiophenes” and “thiophene” should be replaced by “dibenzothiophenes”
4. It is unnecessary to use temperature programmed heating to detemine the sulfur content of single compounds. And the inject and detector temperature should be higher than oven temperature.
5. Most of the references are old and the English is not concise and need to be improved.

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同感啊,近期审了一篇国内作者文章,是关于用有机废液制备煤浆的,也是投Energy and Fuels,虽然稿子里少图,还有很多技术问题.但想想是国内同行,还是给修改了.
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