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dcb005

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帮忙修改一下英语句子:
상황 1
혜연 : Hello, May I speak to 애진 please?
애진 : Hello, this is 애진? What's up?
혜연 : What are you going to do tonight?
애진 : I'm going to meet my friend.
혜연 : Do you have any plans next Saturday?
애진 : Yes, I have. But I am Free after six.
혜연 : Do you want to go out to dinner with me?
애진 : OK. Let's meet at Gangnam Station at 7:00 pm.
혜연 : See you next Saturday.
상황 2
애진 : Hi, 혜연. You look happy is there any special reason?
혜연 : Yes, it's because of my new boyfriend.
애진 : Would you buy me a bite to eat if you are in a good mood?
혜연 : Yes, I will treat you.
애진 : Would you like to go to VIPS?
혜연 : Sure, that sounds great.
상황 3
애진 : Are you happy with him?
혜연 : sure, We are like a match made in heaven.
애진 : When did you first meet him?
혜연 : I met him one month ago. Are you seeing somebody?
애진 : NO, I'd like to meet someone decent. Would you introduce me to someone?
혜연 : I'm going to introduce you to a cool guy.
애진 : Really? Oh, thank you.
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liqiuyan

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dcb005(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 6-8 12:41
修改如下:
상황 1
혜연 : Hello, May I speak to 애진, please?
애진 : Hello, this is 애진. What's up?
혜연 : What are you going to do tonight?
애진 : I'm going to meet my friend.
혜연 : Do you have any plans next Saturday?
애진 : Yes, I do. But I am free after six.
혜연 : Do you want to go out to dinner with me?
애진 : OK. Let's meet at Gangnam Station at 7:00 pm.
혜연 : See you next Saturday.
상황 2
애진 : Hi, 혜연. You look happy. Is there any special reason?
혜연 : Yes, it's because of my new boyfriend.
애진 : Would you buy me a bite to eat if you are in a good mood?
혜연 : Yes, I will treat you.
애진 : Would you like to go to VIPS?
혜연 : Sure, that sounds great.
상황 3
애진 : Are you happy with him?
혜연 : sure, We are like a match made in heaven.
애진 : When did you first meet him?
혜연 : I met him one month ago. Are you seeing somebody?
애진 : NO, I'd like to meet someone decent. Would you introduce me to someone?
혜연 : I'm going to introduce you to a cool guy.
애진 : Really? Oh, thank you.
12楼2009-06-08 11:35:51
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毛毛虫5982

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dcb005(金币+1,VIP+0):修改英语表达的病句 6-8 12:40
楼主你想干嘛?
3楼2009-06-07 22:27:26
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xiaopanpan

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没学过
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5楼2009-06-07 22:57:34
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273949634

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?!  具体想怎么修改?
   翻译成韩语吗?
WithinyouIlosemyself,withoutyouIfindmyselfwantingtobelostagain.
6楼2009-06-07 23:07:49
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