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帮忙修改一下英语句子：
상황 1
혜연 : Hello, May I speak to 애진 please?
애진 : Hello, this is 애진? What's up?
혜연 : What are you going to do tonight?
애진 : I'm going to meet my friend.
혜연 : Do you have any plans next Saturday?
애진 : Yes, I have. But I am Free after six.
혜연 : Do you want to go out to dinner with me?
애진 : OK. Let's meet at Gangnam Station at 7:00 pm.
혜연 : See you next Saturday.
상황 2
애진 : Hi, 혜연. You look happy is there any special reason?
혜연 : Yes, it's because of my new boyfriend.
애진 : Would you buy me a bite to eat if you are in a good mood?
혜연 : Yes, I will treat you.
애진 : Would you like to go to VIPS?
혜연 : Sure, that sounds great.
상황 3
애진 : Are you happy with him?
혜연 : sure, We are like a match made in heaven.
애진 : When did you first meet him?
혜연 : I met him one month ago. Are you seeing somebody?
애진 : NO, I'd like to meet someone decent. Would you introduce me to someone?
혜연 : I'm going to introduce you to a cool guy.
애진 : Really? Oh, thank you.

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dcb005(金币+2,VIP+0):非常感谢 6-8 12:39
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애진 : Hello, this is 애진? What's up?
这一句应加上speaking。
Yes, I have. But I am Free after six.中的have改为do
Hi, 혜연. You look happy is there any special reason?是reasons
혜연 : sure, We are like a match made in heaven将are去掉
至于通顺与否，偶就没有深究了。