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中文:如您所讲,目前新型药物活性化合物的浓度在水环境中是不会出现ppm级别的。但有文献报道称,在一些污水和医院废水中有些常用环境污染物污染物的浓度达到了ppm级别。此外,我们的实验室并不具备检测超低痕量环境污染物的检测技术。为了更为准确的优化去除新型药物活性化合物的条件和考察吸附机理,本研究选择了浓度为ppm的新型环境污染物作为研究对象。

药物活性化合物:PhAC(s)

我的翻译:Just like what the you said, so far the concentration of new PhACs is not ppm level in the water environment. There were reports that the concentrations of some commonly used PhACs were reached ppm level in some sewage and hospital wastewater. In addition, our laboratory does not have detection techniques for analysis of ultra-low trace amounts of PhAC. In order to more accurately optimize the removal conditions and investigate the adsorption mechanism, ppm level PhAC was chosen as the research object in this study.
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NY_sky: 金币+50, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢您详细的解答,非常的专业。 2018-09-24 22:08:57
AS you said, the ppm level will not appear in the water environment regarding the concentration of new PhACs at present,  though ppm level of concentration of  PhACs were found  in  wastewater  in some sewages and hospitals according to some reports. In addition, our laboratory can not trace any PhAC in ultra-low conditions due to technical shortages. In order to optimize the removal conditions more precisely and investigate the absorptive mechanism ,  concentration was chosen as a perspective to study ppm level PhAC.
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nedhou

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AS you said, the ppm level will not appear in the water environment regarding the concentration of new PhACs at present,  though ppm level of concentration of  PhACs were found  in  wastewater  in some sewages and hospitals according to some reports. In addition, our laboratory can not trace any PhAC in ultra-low conditions due to techniques shortages. In order to optimize the removal conditions more precisely and investigate the absorptive mechanism , this study chooses concentration as a perspective to study ppm level PhAC.
帮你修改了一下,看看能否可行。
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nedhou

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补充一下,把techniques shortages 换成technical shortages.
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