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飘落的音符(fjtony163代发): 金币+5, 代发 2018-10-14 02:34:37
fjtony163: 翻译EPI+1, 代发 2018-10-14 02:34:42
(1)By analyzing the viscosity of coating, the SEM, physical properties, inkjet printing quality and dynamic permeability, the influence of nano-silica on inkjet paper coating was studied.
昨天不是说过了吗，先改成主动语态再说。。。还有你的主句里一大串主语的毛病没改掉，后面接的是动词还是单数的was。。先检查一遍再上来问问啊小妹妹。
(2)As shown in Fig.1, the viscosity of coatings increased greatly as the 16nm silica sol dosage was increased. The coatings with too many 16nm silica sol were not good for the preparation and pumping of the coating material.
As shown in Fig.1, the viscosity of coatings increased greatly as the 16nm silica sol dosage （was increased）.
The coatings with （too many） 16nm （silica sol） were not good for the preparation and pumping of the coating material.
这两句话建议重写。 good 这个词不适合在科技论文中描述结果，因为good的面太过广泛也太口语化。 |
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