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审稿人说这句话是错的，我不清楚错在哪里，请牛人解答
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| Aiming to improve the protective ability of the DAP/agar treatment and achieve both protection and consolidation, simultaneous application of the DAP treatment and the TEOS-based consolidant treatment was explored. |
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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助！ 2018-09-13 15:28:34
xfgzju(fjtony163代发): 金币+10, 代发 2018-10-14 02:35:14
fjtony163: 翻译EPI+1, 代发 2018-10-14 02:35:20
RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助！ 2018-09-13 15:28:34
xfgzju(fjtony163代发): 金币+10, 代发 2018-10-14 02:35:14
fjtony163: 翻译EPI+1, 代发 2018-10-14 02:35:20
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除非你这个是在method部分，否则建议修改成主动语态。 Aiming to improve the protective ability of the DAP/agar treatment and achieve both protection and consolidation, simultaneous application of the DAP treatment and the TEOS-based consolidant treatment was explored. We performed both DAP treatment and TEOS-based stone consolidants simultaneously to improve the protection and consolidation of the DAP/agar treatment. 不是你这个专业的，不太懂你的这句话，你是想说我们同时干了这两个事，来改进DAP 或者 agar treatment 单独处理所到达的保护和愈合作用？ 还是说我们“同时”做了这两个实验，更好的改进了DAP/Agar combined treatment? What's the difference? 感觉你这句话读不太懂。 |
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