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xfgzju

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[求助] 审稿人说这句话是错的,我不清楚错在哪里,请牛人解答

Aiming to improve the protective ability of the DAP/agar treatment and achieve both protection and consolidation, simultaneous application of the DAP treatment and the TEOS-based consolidant treatment was explored.
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fjxgn

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这个句子有些头重脚轻的感觉。如果不是applications, were,那实在是看不出来了。

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3楼2018-09-12 11:32:52
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2楼2018-09-12 11:29:32
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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助! 2018-09-13 15:28:34
xfgzju(fjtony163代发): 金币+10, 代发 2018-10-14 02:35:14
fjtony163: 翻译EPI+1, 代发 2018-10-14 02:35:20
除非你这个是在method部分,否则建议修改成主动语态。
Aiming to improve the protective ability of the DAP/agar treatment and achieve both protection and consolidation, simultaneous application of the DAP treatment and the TEOS-based consolidant treatment was explored.

We performed both DAP treatment and TEOS-based stone consolidants simultaneously to improve the protection and consolidation of the DAP/agar treatment.
不是你这个专业的,不太懂你的这句话,你是想说我们同时干了这两个事,来改进DAP 或者 agar treatment 单独处理所到达的保护和愈合作用?
还是说我们“同时”做了这两个实验,更好的改进了DAP/Agar combined treatment?
What's the difference?
感觉你这句话读不太懂。
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