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如晨露之消失

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The underground insect and the aboveground insect are isolated, but the plant was a medium that linked them to a system. In order to discuss the effects of underground pest on the aboveground pest, we used Vicia faba L. as that medium to study the effects of Bradysia odoriphaga Yang et Zhang damaging Vicia faba L.’root on the two kinds of color Acyrthosiphon pisum. The results showed that root feeding by B. odoriphaga larvae caused changes in the nutrition composition of faba, including dry weight, fresh weight ratio, soluble protein, soluble saccharide, trehalose and free amino acids. Development time of nymphals is prolonged by fed faba leaves, two kinds first instar was significantly prolonged, red third instar are significantly prolonged, but others were not different. The mortality rate of the pea aphids nymphs are increased, green nymphs were higher than the control at first and second instar stage , red nymphs were than control at second, third and fourth instar instar stage, and the mortality rate of second instar stage were significant higher than control. Daily offspring production was higher under control when compared to root feeding, and accumulated nymphs of 10 days per female also were significantly higher. Root feeding by B. odoriphaga larvae caused a significantly decrease in the net reproductive rate, intrinsic rate of increase, finite rate of increase, relative growth ratio, body length and weight, and the generation time was prolonged but not significant different. Conclusion:B. odoriphaga direct influence on the nutritional component of faba, and indirectly affect the growth and development of pea aphids.
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如晨露之消失(fjtony163代发): 金币+45, 代发 2018-06-15 01:30:23
如晨露之消失(fjtony163代发): 金币+50, 代发 2018-06-15 01:30:32
fjtony163: 翻译EPI+1, 代发 2018-06-15 01:30:36
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3楼: Originally posted by frozenfox7 at 2018-05-10 01:32:38
Plants provide a communication network for the underground and overground insects despite their geographic segregation. Hence, an underground insect pest may affect their overground allies through th ...

下班前看了一下,如果根据文章想要表达的意思,第一句完全可以省略,这样更简洁。
An underground pest may affect their overground allies through the damaged plants. Here, we used the Vicia faba L to study effects of underground root damage by Bradysia odoriphaga Yang et Zhang on two types of overground color Acyrthosiphon pisum.

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如晨露之消失: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, 谢谢 2018-05-10 09:15:56
爱与雨下: 翻译EPI-1 2018-05-14 22:16:11
一般找母语润色编辑比较好,我们项目组一直都是找母语润色编辑的,这样效果好。
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如晨露之消失: 金币+150, ★★★很有帮助, 非常感谢。 2018-05-10 09:19:11
Plants provide a communication network for the underground and overground insects despite their geographic segregation. Hence, an underground insect pest may affect their overground allies through the damaged plants. Here, we used the Vicia faba L to study effects of underground root damage by Bradysia odoriphaga Yang et Zhang on two types of overground color Acyrthosiphon pisum.

Our results showed that B. odoriphaga larvae changed the nutrition composition of faba, including fresh to dry weight ratio, soluble protein and saccharide, trehalose, and free amino acids. Prolonged nymphal development and first instars on both color aphids, prolonged third instar on red, incresed first and second instar mortality rate on green...

你下面这段话写的很乱,看这段英文本身好像都缺少关键词,如果你能在发帖之前先稍微把英文检查一遍,或者把你要表达的意思用中文大致写在下面,就比较方便非相关专业的人来帮忙翻译了,不然太浪费时间了。

"Development time of nymphals is prolonged by fed faba leaves, two kinds first instar was significantly prolonged, “red” third instar are significantly prolonged, but others were not different. The mortality rate of the pea aphids nymphs are increased, green nymphs were higher than the control at first and second instar stage , red nymphs were (?) than control at second, third and fourth "instar instar" stage, and the mortality rate of second instar stage were significant higher than control. "
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如晨露之消失

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4楼: Originally posted by frozenfox7 at 2018-05-10 05:02:04
下班前看了一下,如果根据文章想要表达的意思,第一句完全可以省略,这样更简洁。
An underground pest may affect their overground allies through the damaged plants. Here, we used the Vicia faba L to stu ...

谢谢您的建议,如果您有时间帮忙润色一下,下面是中文意思。
豌豆蚜取食后延长若虫历期,两种色型豌豆蚜1龄历期延长最为显著,红色型豌豆蚜3龄历期延长差异显著,其他各龄历期无差异;提高豌豆蚜若虫的死亡率,绿色型豌豆蚜1龄和2龄的死亡率高于对照组,红色型豌豆蚜2龄、3龄和4龄的死亡率高于对照组,其中红色型豌豆蚜2龄死亡率显著高于对照组;对照组中两种色型豌豆蚜每天产蚜数均高于处理组,10 d累积产蚜数显著高于处理组;韭菜迟眼蕈蚊危害减小两种色型豌豆蚜种群的净增值率、内禀增长率、周限增长率、相对生长率、体长和体重,平均世代周期延长但是无显著差异
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