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投SCI二区期刊被拒了,从审稿意见体会写好文章

Title: xx Method for xx Clustering

Reviewer Comments:

the authors failed to provide sound theoretical account for two major arguments made in the paper, which has left the paper with little contribution to the field. More detailed comments follow.

Firstly, the authors stated in section 2.3 that they wishes to maximize the Ia(k) and to minimize the It(k) for an optimal result of a clustering? While the goal of clustering is normally to simultaneously maximize the within-cluster similarity and between-cluster dissimilarity, the authors need to offer a sound explanation for their statement.
注解:虽然提出了一个聚类问题的求解目标,但没有阐明它的理论依据或合理性。
写作体会:求解思路要阐明它的理论依据、科学性、或合理性(让审稿人认同)。

Secondly, in the same section, the authors presented the TR function? with an arbitrary parameter 2. This function is critical in the paper in that subsequent deductions of the indices depend on it. Therefore, a theoretical basis and careful
explanation are needed.
注解:创新地提出了一个目标公式TR,其中参数2没有解释怎么来的、含义和用途。
写作体会:对设计新方法的文章(特别是公式不是由理论推导产生的情况),提出新的公式要有合理的(理论)依据,公式中参数的选取要有依据。

Other than the two aforementioned major points, the paper in general was not well presented. At the beginning of the paper, an array of existing alternative methods were simply listed, with no effort made toward making a connection to the current paper.
注解:引言罗列了许多现有的方法,没有阐明与本文的关系。
写作体会:对现有的方法的回顾要说明现有的方法的局限性,并引出本文的目的和动机,即新提出的方法克服了这些局限性、超越了它们的性能、或解决了尚未解决的问题。

the conclusion of the paper was not convincing. There was no clear evidence that the method proposed in this paper was superior to many existing methods.
注解:新方法只与少数现有方法比较,工作还欠缺。
写作体会:多搜集现有方法的程序,多做实验,证明新方法的优越。

Lastly, the paper would have benefited from a discussion of the limitation of the proposed method or any caution in its application.
注解:没有思考和讨论新方法的局限性和使用条件。
写作体会:分析新方法的局限性和使用条件。
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