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huangyuan838

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cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas watermelon and melon were harvested when the fruits were ripe, which is after the stage of fruit enlargement.
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caitikuan

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huangyuan838(金币+1,VIP+0):ok 3-4 18:22
cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas riped watermelon and melon were harvested after the stage of fruit enlargement.

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wwjlf

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huangyuan838(金币+1,VIP+0):good 3-4 18:22
cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas watermelon and melon were harvested when the fruits were ripe, which is after cucumber。
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wwjlf

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huangyuan838(金币+1,VIP+0):good 3-4 18:22
cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas watermelon and melon were harvested when the fruits were ripe, which is after cucumber。
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natural01

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huangyuan838(金币+1,VIP+0):thank you 3-4 18:22
cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas watermelon and melon were harvested when the fruits were ripe, after that stage。
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huangyuan838(金币+2,VIP+0):Very good 3-5 11:57
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