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cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas watermelon and melon were harvested when the fruits were ripe, which is after the stage of fruit enlargement.
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the stage of fruit enlargement 用了两次

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cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas riped watermelon and melon were harvested after the stage of fruit enlargement.

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cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas watermelon and melon were harvested when the fruits were ripe, which is after cucumber。

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cucumber was picked at the stage of fruit enlargement, whereas watermelon and melon were harvested when the fruits were ripe, which is after cucumber。

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