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Most importantly, the contributions of this study, especially to those in other communities, should be addressed convincingly in the revised version. An itemized response report shall also be submitted along with the revised version to expedite the re-review process.
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Reviewer #1: In general, it is a good technical paper, but it still needs the following revisions:
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1) the aims of this study is not clear in the last paragraph of introduction. Please address "the aims of this study are ..." in the last paragraph of Introduction;
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