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[求助] 一句话,这么写我认为还是有些不妥。

Copper sulfur bond is easy to form with the reaction of copper sulfate and sulfydryl, which forms a closed-loop system on the surface of the absorbent. 求助,帮忙改一句话。硫酸铜与巯基反应极易形成铜硫键,铜硫键的形成使吸附剂表面形成一个闭环体系。The addition of sodium sulfide transforms the closed-loop system to a open-loop system, which leads to the formation of complex copper sulfide (Cu-S) micro/nano-particles on the surface of the absorbent .硫化钠的加入使吸附剂闭环体系打开,生成的硫铜微纳米化合物分布在吸附剂表面上。   这么说对不?是否有歧义???
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Copper sulfur bond is easy to form with the reaction of copper sulfate and sulfydryl, which forms a closed-loop system on the surface of the absorbent. 求助,帮忙改一句话。硫酸铜与巯基反应极易形成铜硫键,铜硫键的形成使吸附剂表面形成一个闭环体系。The addition of sodium sulfide transforms the closed-loop system to a open-loop system, which leads to the formation of complex copper sulfide (Cu-S) micro/nano-particles on the surface of the absorbent .硫化钠的加入使吸附剂闭环体系打开,生成的硫铜微纳米化合物分布在吸附剂表面上。   这么说对不?是否有歧义???

the reaction of copper sulfate and sulfhydryl radical readily forms Copper sulfur bonds , which yield a closed-loop system on the surface of the absorbent(从句主语是铜硫键). (或 the reaction of copper sulfate and sulfhydryl radical highly leads to the  formation of Copper sulfur bonds , which yields a closed-loop system on the surface of the absorbent(从句主语是铜硫键的形成)
The addition of sodium sulfide opens the closed-loop system (to a open-loop system), and results in the formation of complex copper sulfide (Cu-S) micro/nano-particles on the surface of the absorbent .
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